Rumble's an incubus now, and he has some interesting powers over peoples' affections. He fears that he might not be fully in control over this power when Flitter and Cloudchaser become a little closer to him than usual.
I don't mean to be a prude, but you inserted Flitter at the gym when you were referring to Cloudchaser. Rumble was trying to emulate a depicted martial stance, then Flitter walks out and corrects the stance? Otherwise, great chapter!
Damn, this is both very hot and very believable. Feels more realistic than most 'get all the mares' stories.
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Good chapter. I like how you're portraying the twins. Hope you keep updating at a steady pace.
I don't mean to be a prude, but you inserted Flitter at the gym when you were referring to Cloudchaser. Rumble was trying to emulate a depicted martial stance, then Flitter walks out and corrects the stance? Otherwise, great chapter!
5949973 Darn, thought I caught all of those mistakes. Good catch.