Love the update!

Seems that Luna may want a piece of that pie now. Nice to see that she's at least progressing a bit slower in that regard if so.

Also really like the idea with the changeling theatre, especially if Discord is involved.

5790885 Testing testing, is this thing on? Awesome! Okie Dokie Lokie, glad you liked the update, now it's my job to do the little spoilers soooooo... Crap he's coming, all I can say is Chapter 7, look forward to it, though it won't be what you expect.

Getting bit during sex
YES!

I really like the way you introduced the magical system and the concept of cosmic limiters.
Definitely looking forward!

Just amazing! that's all I can say about this so far. Good plot *wink* *wink*, and the overall phase is just right. Not to fast and not to slow, because I might end up falling asleep during the best parts.
Anyway! I'll look forward to the next chapter and how the play is going to work out.
Oh I see my ride is here. *jumps into the tardis* Alright Doc off we go, Alonsy!!!

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5792879 Cosmic limiters play a double role in the story, first is Wolf's weaknesses. Second is they are a means of controlling my characters. For example Wolf is afraid of the color pink so he keeps his hands off of Pinkie Pie. This is kinda the opposite of a self-insert story. To be perfectly honest if I met Wolf I would hate him. His thread was just too interesting not to write down though. No limiters work on Discord, Pinkie Pie, Twilight or Luna though. I can't manipulate their actions at all, simply record them in silent horror.

5793316 Lucky you get to read Chapter 14 and I havn't even finished writing it yet. Well don't spoil it for me, I can't wait to see how this turns out either. Anyways, thanks and I hope I keep being up to par!

0_0 100 likes All I can say is you guys are awesome and thank you very much.

5818348 you are welcome mortal perhaps when I destroy this world ill let you live so you can entertain me with stories of ponies.

seriously though this is a great story.

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Treat him with all the respect you would show an ambassador from the griffins. He’s a nice guy, but still capable of being absolutely monstruos.”

Treat him with all the respect you would show an ambassador from the griffins. He’s a nice guy, but still capable of being absolutely monstrous”

5842781 Forgive me, but I can't see the difference between the two. Always been bad at that kinda thing. I can tell that there is a difference, but can't figure out. what or where. Would you mind pointing it out more clearly?

5845033 The difference is in "monstruos".It should be spelled like monstrous.Just switch the u and o.

5845040 Ah. Gotcha thanks. I'm on it!

When will chapter 3 be out? I cant wait for it any longer :D lol

5852770 Ok, so my editor is feeling better, so I just need to bribe Velvet with some ice cream or Chinese and we will get chapter 3

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YAY :D

Wolf stories are best stories. Amiright. AMIRIIIIIIIIIGHT

5983721 Meh Coyotes are at least 20% cooler.

This feels old and familiar, yet I know I haven't read a story like this. Ah, I know why it feels familiar. Wolf reminds me of Perrin Aybara. Only experienced. Not that that is a bad thing. Reminding me of my favorite character from a series I have the full collection of around my bed is very difficult, without just yanking him from the story to be here. You do that though. So congrats, and know I shall be tracking this story.

5997072 Tell me more of this character or link me to the series. Sounds interesting.

5997104 It is the Wheel of Time series, mostly by Robert Jordan. Perrin is one of the three main male characters, a blacksmith who discovers an affinity and closeness to wolves as he leaves his home village with Rand al'Thor (Dragon Reborn), and Matrim Cauthon (bearer of The Dark One's Luck). He meets a guy who teaches him not to freak the hell out when he starts being able to hear wolves, and goes from there. Oh, and he can bitch slap steel around trees with a focused punch by the end. I recommend it, because even if you don't like Perrin, you will like some one.

Sorry to point this out, but I just finished Romeo and Juliet and you forgot a death

Discord snaps his fingers and a scroll falls before me. I catch it and begin reading. Nothing has been lost, however some things have been seriously altered. The king has been replaced with Celestia. Lethal swordfights have been replaced by brawling. Only three ponies die in the new version. Tybalt, who is now the Prince of Stallions as opposed to the Prince of Cats, and of course Romeo and Juliet. It still holds all its dark beauty. Discord explains the part of killing off Paris as insulting to the royalty while Luna grumbles about Blue Blood.

Where is Mercutio?

You portrayed the character in this story at a level a don't see very often. Great Job.

Ice cream, huh? I can accept that; not all of us can sustain ourselves off of deeply forbidden, eldritch secrets most foul and arcane!

“You, in particular, will have access to the entirety of the royal libraries, permission to address royalty informally, as well as permission to keep and bare arms at all times. Furthermore, you have equivalent to the rank of captain yet you are beyond commander's authority when acting under my orders. You serve all royalty, but always remember your oath of fealty is to me.”

Who else, as soon as they saw the treat royalty informally, immediately thought of blueblood

I stop and drop my backpack and hoodie off in a fluid, practiced motion. He is shocked by the cords of muscle hiding under my hoodie. I flex and he whimpers.”

hahaha i cant stop leafing