another update!

This story is getting good. Can't wait for her to get her first surprise party from pinkie pie, though she probably wont take it well

dun dun dun love the story keep it up!

Yes a new chapter...

*reads*

Oh no.. Pinkie will will be like and throw a party

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Beware of Pinkie. Beware!

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Pinkie? Plus her? Party?
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NightSoul´s right:
Dun dun duuuuuun!

Anyway:
I´m really curious for where this is going. Really a very good story.
And one of the very rare stories that made me start to tear up, thanks to the musical theme and the memories at chapter 1.

Wow...Very, very sad...I'm watching you. *clicks watch button*

Love the story. Have it in my favorites, liked it and tracking. Keep up the good work, and is this not featuring Shining Armor, because I see a love interest with Candence and the 1st person pony?

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Love interest between... a buh? No. No, no no. That was not the vibe I intended to give lol.
Luna was intended to be the Physical Therapist for the first person pony when I started the story, but after Candence was introduced to the show, I felt that she fit that role better than Luna did. From the age of nine to nineteen the first person pony was cut off from the world, so she didn't get anytime to progress mentally like regular foals do. So instead of having the mind of a late teenager, she is more of a child. Since Candence was Twilight's foal sitter, I thought it would be better to have her watch over Ms. First person pony. </rant>

P.S. Ratchet pony omgggg

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“The age I was taken,” I clarified. Candence embraced me in her hooves and pulled my body against hers. This time I didn’t push her away. It was a simple gesture, but it felt so warm and familiar. I then felt wetness on my shoulder and could faintly feel Candence’s body shaking.

That's what intentionally gave me the vibe.

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Hmm.. you do make a point. Maybe if I change it to something like: Candence wrapped me in a motherly embrace.

Interesting story.
I enjoy reading it but it's littered with LOTS of spelling errors...
And it's Cadence. Not Candence.

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Cadence...
I'll be damned. Thanks.

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No problem....
Quite a few people have mucked her name up so it's no biggie.

Fun facts about Mi Amore "Cadence" Cadenza's name.
Mi Amore literally translates to: My Love.
A Cadenza is a point in an orchestra musical piece where the orchestra stops playing so that a single artist (usually the player of a string instrument) can perform a solo piece.
Cadence is (in music) rythm, fall in pitch of voice, tonal inflection and the close of musical phrase.

Also Cadence was originally a unicorn when first concieved.
Then a pegasus.
Then an alicorn.

Cool huh?

This...
IS....
AWESOME!