They love each other, no matter doubt. Spitfire and Rainbow Dash just have agreed onto a relationship. A relationship with many barriers in it. Barriers, that will drive both pegasus over their limits.
This is the first SpitDash that I've read, I think I little bit prefer SoarDash, though. But this one is totally interesting! Can't wait for the next chapter.
'The shadow managed it’s way through' 'It' is the shadow, therefore implying it means 'the shadow's way through' the ('s) makes it possessive, it is possessing the action of managing a way through. so (it's) is correct.
"shadow sighed, slowly opening it’s suit. A cyan pegasus with a colorful mane made it's way out of it, shuddering once her wings were" Again, the 's makes it possessive of the suit, and actually, it should have been "shuddering once it's wings were" because it wasn't yet explained who the shadow was. That was my bad.
"what you are doing Spits.”, then spread her" "you're" is a contraction of "you are", they mean the same thing, one is just shortened. Though I will agree that based on Rainbow's personality, she would have said "you're" and not "you are".
As for the last one, yeah I missed that one. Good eye.^^
Now, normally you'd be correct, as the rule for almost all forms of the possessive in the English language is as you describe. "It" is kind of the exception that proves the rule.
5451786 Eh, don't sweat it. You're falling prey to homophones, a common enough pitfall, even amongst those who do speak the language well. Your grasp of English is better than many here. And you did use the proper form of "who's" in that sentence, so you are doing some things right.
5451761 ...I stand thoroughly corrected. The more you forget from English class, the more you feel like an idiot when someone tells you that you messed up. Thanks for pointing that out so I don't mess up more in the future.^^
>They keep a relationship full of barriers.
Barriers, that will drive both pegasus over their limits.
they sex while doing sonic rainbooms don't they?....
5419096
Just wait hehe
But as mentioned before, more romantic clop^^
Oh I thought Dash was going to be set on actual fire, but this good too.
This is the first SpitDash that I've read, I think I little bit prefer SoarDash, though. But this one is totally interesting! Can't wait for the next chapter.
5419148
Nah
5419451
Glad you like it that far, Even it's just the Prologue
And sorry but I'm Not into Stallions xD
The shadow managed its way through
shadow sighed, slowly opening its suit. A cyan pegasus with a colorful mane made her way out of it, shuddering once her wings were
what you're doing, Spits.” Rainbow then spread her
my job for Celestia's sake
So far it's an alright beginning. Let's see where it goes.
5423909
thanks, corrected it.
As said before, I'm not native-english and such small errors are easily left unseen
Thank you soooo much for writing my request!
5431439
You are welcome
5423909 Actually:
'The shadow managed it’s way through'
'It' is the shadow, therefore implying it means 'the shadow's way through' the ('s) makes it possessive, it is possessing the action of managing a way through. so (it's) is correct.
"shadow sighed, slowly opening it’s suit. A cyan pegasus with a colorful mane made it's way out of it, shuddering once her wings were"
Again, the 's makes it possessive of the suit, and actually, it should have been "shuddering once it's wings were" because it wasn't yet explained who the shadow was. That was my bad.
"what you are doing Spits.”, then spread her"
"you're" is a contraction of "you are", they mean the same thing, one is just shortened. Though I will agree that based on Rainbow's personality, she would have said "you're" and not "you are".
As for the last one, yeah I missed that one. Good eye.^^
5419143 You know, that's actually a fun concept. XP
5451567
Glad you like it
5451554
Um, no. To put it quite bluntly, you're wrong.
"It's" is a contraction for "it is" or "it has".
"Its" is the possessive for "it".
Citation 1 Citation 2.
Now, normally you'd be correct, as the rule for almost all forms of the possessive in the English language is as you describe. "It" is kind of the exception that proves the rule.
5451567
5451761
Okay okay that's enough you two smart-asses^^
I know my english is bad but you two friendly bickering around who's right won't help me
5451786
Eh, don't sweat it. You're falling prey to homophones, a common enough pitfall, even amongst those who do speak the language well. Your grasp of English is better than many here. And you did use the proper form of "who's" in that sentence, so you are doing some things right.
5451761 ...I stand thoroughly corrected. The more you forget from English class, the more you feel like an idiot when someone tells you that you messed up. Thanks for pointing that out so I don't mess up more in the future.^^
5451786 But... But it's so much fuuuuuun. XD
5451973
Continue and I'll let Midnight edit SpitDash...
5452016 0.o Ok, ok! You win!
5452813
hehe as always, good boy
5453655 I'm apparently your pet now? In that case, I expect cookies!
5487246
Cookies, okay
Everything else belongs to my marefriend, sorry