In darkness, there is light.
That was an emotionally powerful chapter.
A couple of the longer paragraphs could stand to be broken up a bit. Makes them easier on the eyeballs.
5503139 I'll see what I can do about the paragraphs. They don't look so bad in a word document, but you're right, posted here on the site they look long and are kind of strenuous on the eyes.
That was an emotionally powerful chapter.
A couple of the longer paragraphs could stand to be broken up a bit. Makes them easier on the eyeballs.
5503139 I'll see what I can do about the paragraphs. They don't look so bad in a word document, but you're right, posted here on the site they look long and are kind of strenuous on the eyes.