I have to kill her...she...she has to die!
There's no other way...sh-shhhheee j-just won't let me do what needs to be done if she's still alive! You know what I mean, right?...oh...no-nonononono...I'm doing that odd thing Discord would do...I-I'm talking to no one! It's been happening more frequently lately, actually...I feel as though my head is just so...jumbled. Like there's so much swirling around so fast that I can't decide on what to do...and then that feeling as though my every action is watched by thousands upon thousands of strange creatures from another world...Discord used to always talk about that...
Gah! Shhhhh...wait...she's there...watching me...right on the other side of the room...I-I think she saw me glance over...her eyes moved away just as mine did...
She's weak...immature...naïve. She won't be hard to overtake...I...I could beat her down with my hooves...or run her through with my horn...but first...I have to bring her...to...the floor...
I'll just...calmly stroll to the side...
Pretend to notice something on the floor—No! Don't look over!—Turn...turn slowly and lean down...then...
Buck her to the floor!
...what just shattered?
Indeed, what did just shatter?
Anyway, here's a little craziness for you, didn't take long to make actually, just...did what came right out of my head! Haha...wait...should I be worried, or exceed about that...? Errrrr mm...anyway, this should be easy to tell who is "speaking" here, and if not, it'll be revealed next chapter.
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Oh dear...
I wonder what Twilight Sparkle would think if she read this chapter...
Twilight: ...You know, I think I'll give up sleeping. Sleeping is overrated! Gets in the way of my studies. In fact, I like studying SO much, I think I'llboardupmydoorsandwindowsandnevereversleepagainandOHMYGOSHCELESTIA'SINSANEHELPMEHELPMEHELPME!!!
Celestia, you should take some cyanide. It'll make you feel better trust me.
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YES DEAR?
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Probably something along the lines of that, actually...
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Sounds like a delicious punch juice!
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An interesting premise, one that is indeed plausible. It is fairly well written throughout and has enough going on to keep a reader invested in waiting for the updates. I love the characterization that you have given to Celestia/Tia and her interactions with Discord and herself are fantastic. It can sometimes be difficult to follow her schizophrenic bouts, but I don't consider that a negative, seeing as it fits with the subject matter. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this.