Brilliant start can't wait to read more

5334220 Thanks Evey

AHHHHHHHH! *dies*

5335554 You are too excited, my friend. I think you're going to have a heart attack before this story is finished. Lol.

I really like this, but the text all bunched together the way it is makes it difficult to read. Maybe space it out a bit? otherwise its a pretty damn good story so far. I'm guessing this is before Celestia and Luna? It seems like the three tribes

5346712 Yeah, still working on how to change a few formats in the edit phase. And kinda. It has no Alicorns, beyond that basically. Except one less tribe. Unicorns.

Actually, how do you change the spacing?

5346768 well, keep it up. Its a good start for a first story and done better than when I first started out.

5346805 Well, if that's true, then getting better means being awesome. And I can't figure out how to change the spacing on here.

5346810 Click edit, Go into a part of the story where you feel it should be shifted and hit TAB to indent or Enter to move it down a space

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I feel like a moron

5346914 Hey, gotta learn stuff somehow, not a lot of people know this stuff and I didn't space out my first story either. Now I'm about 16 stories deep into my writing and with each chapter I learn more.

5346935 That's how stories are made better. With the criticism of all those who read it. But, I also have pretty descriptive paragraphs that can't be indented or spaced too far apart. There's the formatting button at the top of the chapter that indicates a few things like line spacing for the site.

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For anyone who has the password, I've posted part of the next chapter. Awake

This is how I edit this story, for those who want to know: I write a couple hundred words at a time, then I post it on here to see how the format is going to be. I think I have the weirdest way of updating ever.