• Published 29th Oct 2014
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Bon Bon The Hero Of Falmra - Phony15



Bon Bon is a earth pony candy maker. She is best friends (And lovers) With a mare named Lyra, her life was amazing. Almost perfect but then... Something happened...

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Bon Bon's first test

Bon and James arrived at a large castle, Bon stepped in and a quite old man walked up to James "James! Why did you bring a outsider into the castle!? She could be a assassin working for the Havlin..."

"Pff, i wish she was... She is the Hero sadly" The old man stopped and looked shocked

He thought for a moment "We need to do the test then... We cant be to safe..." The old man waved for Bon to follow, and she did



They reached a room filled with spikes, animals, spinning sword, and what seemed to be bandits "This is the Hero Testing Grounds, the people you see are captured bandits who are only let out if they can kill the Hero, this place is made in such a way that only the hero can complete... So good luck" Bon gulped, she didnt know if she could get threw this death trap but she jumped and quickly got attacked by a bear, she unsheathed her sword quickly. The bear clawed at her and she skillfully blocked, with a quick and simple leg sweep she was able to force the bear get into a awkward position making it much easier for he to dig her blade into the bears neck. Bon spun her sword a bit and walked onto a small bridge like path way with two spinning blades at different elevations, she took a moment to stop and think, it seemed that the blades where impossible to get above or under but the middle was open, but even so she would have to take off her armor making her very defenseless but then she remembered her ring, she started to force magic to it but then she heard "Hey! No magic is allowed when doing the course!" Bon sighed sadly and dispelled the magic around her ring and took off her armor and took a few steps back. After a moment of hesitation she ran towards it, jumping threw the blades open gap and passed. She then quickly cheeked her self and noticed she was not dead, she ran towards what seemed to be a narrow hall, on the other side there was a bandit with a bow

"Well god damn it..." Bon mumbled and started to run threw the hall, soon she noticed a arrow flying at her and everything seemed to go into slow motion. She somersaulted avoiding the arrow and was able to keep her momentum and when she got to her feet she kept running instantly, reaching the bandit quite fast and slashed his neck and kept running with out care, she saw a large wall with very small foot holds, she stopped again and thought about it, then right after she started to climb using her sword to help her movement, as she climbed her foot slipped and she had to use her sword as a platform to not fall to her death. In one moment she jumped, grabbed a foot hold, ripped her sword out of the wall with her feet, threw it up to her hand, and kept climbing


After quite a while of climbing she reached the top and then there was the issue of getting down but when she looked down she saw a pack of wolves "Really!? Come on!" She yelled and took a moment to think once again, she saw one was still and so she jumped down. She landed on the wolf breaking its back using her sword to slash one of the first wolf that leaped at her, she felt the searing pain of another one claw her back. She turned stabbing the wolf in the eye ripping the sword out to slash the neck of another one and in that same motion she was able to turn slash another one in the face forcing it to stumble back giving her a moment to leap over a wolf aiming to cite the back of her leg and slash its back as she flew over it. The face-slashed wolf growled in anger and pain at Bon, she ran towards the wolf and let go of her sword grabbing the wolf by the neck slamming it into the ground breaking the wolf's back, she picked her sword back up and sheathed it, walking threw a door



Inside the room there was a narrow hallway on a bridge like pathway, there was on walls or roof, most likely for the many bandits with bows on the pillars that where coming from the ground and above the pit full of spikes, more into the hall way was more spinning blades and another large wall with the small foot holds "... I am going to kill that old man..." She started running towards the blades, and soon she felt everything in slow motion again, she saw many arrows flying at her left and right side. She blocked the arrows on her right side with her sword and jumped over the arrows on her left side and kept running. She leaped threw the blades effortlessly and with only three jumps and sword stabs she was on the top of the wall, at the bottom there where quite a few bandits with swords, she jumped down but this time she dropped to the back side of the bandit and kicked his back with both feet letting her roll to live

She quickly slashed up the bandits and burst threw the next set of doors, there was nothing but paladins and the normal castle walls, the old man was standing there, he closed his eyes and when he opened them they where stars. He looked at her "Yup, she used magic that she didnt even know she was using... Shes the Hero" Bon stopped and blinked a few times

"So when everything was slow that was... Magic? But... I didn't mean to do it"

He laughed "Exactly! All Heros are blessed with the power to make things slow but it only happens with ranged attacks... Unless you learn to use it" Bon was pissed

"Why couldnt you just shoot a arrow at me!?" And he laughed again

"Well the power dosn't work unless the hero knows its a real attack!" Bon punched him and walked away...

Author's Note:

Yay! New story!