I've noticed that some of you might not know about the continuation of this Story, which is here Quest for the mask, also Cade and I have yet to finish revising this story so...it will take more time. Since it is summer we can hope to finished that before Christmas
I'm still in school! Have this week and last week for finals. So I, emphasis on I, have eight days left.
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didn't know sorry
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Nah, it's okay. Some schools have different schedules.
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where I'm at schools normal end by may 20 so too used to that
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The schools in my district usually get released during mid-June.
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neat we usually go back to school about second or third week in august
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And my schools get back into school, usually, on the Monday after Labor Day, or soon after.
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Cool
No... Surely not...
This is the
BEST DAY EVER!
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Okay
I'm tempted to read this, if for the only reason because I'm a huge bionicle fan.
3345920 I tried my best to write this based on MNOLG and when Takua gathered the Toa stones but I did change a few things, as well as have grammatical errors that some just are annoyed by, but I am happy to have wrote this and the others in the series. As a huge bionicle fan myself I tried to remove a lot of retcons, like there being more then one makuta, in this story there is only one makuta with the other members of the brotherhood being like him but not exactly like him. The side-story why we bleed green goes into this more.
3369934 thanks dude, and I did ask for them to look at it. I took it as something to improve on so it is all good, and I do have an editor and grammar nazi helping on the revision of this which is mainly the grammar as you said in your comment. We only have chapter one and two done and my grammar nazi has school so I don't rush him, so it will be awhile before most of the grammar is fixed.
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The context was for a group that disallowed self-promoting... the first post was a self-promotion by this guy. Though now that it's been ages, you are right - I was overly harsh, and I do apologize. Additionally, the author took it like a champ, which only drives the peg in further.