Gregor was bored. He had sat in the room for hours on end, doing nothing but sipping his now empty drink. He did, however, at one point wonder how he got here. After many times of guessing, all of which made no sense, he gave up. Thus resorting him to stare at the ceiling. He couldn't sleep because of his injuries, forcing him to tense his muscles any time he got a touch of pain. Right now, he actually wished he had died.
"He's just in here." Nurse Redheart said from behind the door. Who would be here to see me? Gregor thought, as the door slowly opened, revealing two very tall horses with long names, wings and a horn for each. One was white, the other was blue. They both approached him in the manner of wary rulers, not knowing what to do with the creature before them. "Greetings, human." The blue one said. "We are Princess Luna, co-ruler of Equestria." It figures "and this is mine sister Celestia, co-ruler of Equestria. We control the moon, she controlls the sun."
"Control the sun? I don't beleive it. Or the moon. Where I was last before I came here, the sun and moon 'rose and set' because the planet was spinning." Gregor said, thinking he possibly misheard.
"I will give you a demonstration..." Celestia began, not knowing his name.
"It's CC-5576-39, but you can call me Gregor, or Captain Gregor." Gregor said, with disbelief strung into each of his words.
"Alright then, Captain Gregor, it is about time I lower the sun anyways." With that, Celestia opened the window across from Gregor, giving him a clear view of the sky, and the sun. Gregor momentarily shielded his eyes from the sudden exposure. He then rolled his eyes as Celestia lit up her horn and set the sun. He was awe-struck. He then saw Luna light up her horn, and the moon rose. Seeing this left his mouth agape and his right eye twitching. Both princesses noticed this, which earned him a giggle from both sisters. "Well, do you beleive us now, Captain?" Celestia asked, taunting him to deny what he saw.
Gregor gulped, then said in a worried tone, "As long as you don't hurt me, I'll beleive whatever you say! I also have a question." He truly didn't want to get on the bad side of either princess, in fear of what they might do to him.
"Fire away, Captain." Luna said.
"Why isn't anyone afraid of me?" Gregor Questioned.
"We have a friend named Anonymous. He is at the dining hall as we speak. He forgot to have supper today. He is also a human, like you." Luna finished with a smile.
"Well, we must get going now, Captain. But there is a few more ponies you should meet..." with that, as if on cue, six ponies walked in, the steady clip-clop of their hooves on the floor getting louder. The two princesses left in a flash of magic, leaving Gregor with the six smaller horses. When they approached, he noticed they were being led by another winged unicorn. It was the first one to stick out a hoof. It was purple and had an odd star tattoo on its butt.
"It's nice to meet you," She quickly glanced at the clipboard at the end of his bed. "Captain Gregor. My name is Twilight Sparkle." He lightly grabbed her hoof and shook it, then nodded. Next was an enthusiastic-looking pink horse.
"Hiya! My name's Pinkie Pie! I've never seen you before, are you new?" He nodded warily, unsure of what this spastic pony might do. "Ohmygosh! If you're new, we need to throw you a party!" The first one leaned over and whispered something about 'later' and 'injury'.
He was then faced with a white unicorn with a well-styled mane and tail. "Hello there darling! It's a pleasure to meet you." She then stuck out her hoof. Judging by the was she talked, he presumed she was some noble. So naturally, he brought it up and pecked it, earning himself a light blush and a giggle. Gregor just shrugged it off. Next was a orange pony with blonde hair.
"Hai there sugarcube. Mah name's Applejack." She sounded like a farmer to Gregor. Once again, he shook her hoof and nodded. She then backed up, allowing a timid yellow pegagsus with a pink mane to walk forward.
"Um... hi..." She stuttered. Gregor could see she's he was scared, so he went to calm her. He, for some unknown reason, rubbed her ear between his thumb and index finger, causing her to lean into the petting involuntarily.
"What better way to confirm I won't hurt you?" He asked. Finally came a blue horse with wings walking, or rather, trotting, like she owned the world.
"My name is Rainbow Dash. Fastest flyer in all of Equestria, soon to become a wonderbolt." Well she's modest.
Gregor said while shaking her hoof, "Weren't you the one who found me? I'm quite grateful you brought me here." She then squeed in excitement at both earning praise, and hearing Gregor talk to her the most. After the squee, Gregor was sure he had made a mistake by inflating her already too large ego. Rainbow Dash then calmed herself down enough to Deepak again.
"Yeah. You seemed scarier though with those weird clothes on. So I got everypony here to help me get you to the hospital, where they took your first layer of clothes off. It was strange seeing you had two sets of clothes though. You were also muttering something about 'droid's." Rainbow Dash suddenly began ranting. Before she could go any further, Twilight put a hoof in her mouth.
"That wasn't clothing they took off of me at first. That was armor. I was using it when I helped the Colonel and the D-Squad off Abafar." Gregor said.
Twilight became excited, as she was determined to start furiously questioning him to no end, determined on learning who the Colonel was, what the D-Squad was, and where Abafar was She produced a pen, a ink bottle, and a scroll out of thin air. Lucky for him, Nurse Redheart came in and ushsured them out, to the sadness of Twilight, saying that visiting hours were over. Gregor mouthed 'thank you' to Redheart, who just nodded and gave him a smile. Those horses sure are interesting to say the least. Gregor thought. I wonder when my wounds will heal. Then I'll be able to try and escape this 'Equestria' I'm on. With nothing left to think about, Gregor found himself finally sleepy. No matter how hard he tried, he'd emit a yawn every ten to fifteen seconds. He then fell asleep, dreaming what Equestria would be like.
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In Princess Luna's private quarters...
"Dang it! Not even the alien will stay awake through the night! Sometimes we hate staying up late and controlling the moon instead of the sun." With that, Luna harumphed and blew off some steam by playing CoD Black Ops II.
I LIKE IT! Also, first.
4914081 what was with those two comments? Glitches out or something?
1. But- b- Never mind.
2. Aw- Why not? Molestia is bestia.
3. If there was one, I'm not sure who it would even be with. Rainbow Dash because rainbows and she found him? Twilight because she asks a lot of questions? Luna because he sleeps during the night?
Regardless, dialogue was pretty stale in my opinion. The ponies seemed very monotone and they also have pretty much the same exact actions and thoughts in the majority of HiE I've read.
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I swear, if he meets Pinkie Pie and she acts like how people always write her, annoying uncontrolled, inconsiderate, not knowing when to stop, just all around mentally-deficient, I might burst an artery.
4914366 okay, don't worry. I'm planning on changing it a bit as I progress.
Also, long time no see.
4914377 Yes- long time no see. I'll be waiting to see how this changes. Until then, I'm not voting good or bad. However, at the current mark, I am inclined towards the latter.
4914384 eh. Oh well. Can't have em' all. That's okay with me.
4914384 besides. You'll see why I'm so accepting of that if you look at my other stories. I'm used to it.
4914452 It's good not to let those things bother you. Just keep on writing, friend.
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you and me both
4914498 Honestly, season one pinkie was eh, but by season four I started to find her antics a bit funny. However, reading how people write her on here has made me hate her. A very biased, unreasonable hate. All because of writers who can't characterize so they write her as how they see her, except their interpretation of 'funny' is nothing like it.
Congrats on getting the story in the "popular stories" box.
"We have a friend named anonymous.
great him again