When introduced into the world of Equestria Trainers' Society, Miraborne is to become a breeding pony for Lady Satine's enterprise. Meanwhile, she falls madly in love with the first bat pony she has ever seen...
Parts of this story definitely have potential, mostly regarding exploration of how the Society works, but there are a painful number of typos and the pacing is absolutely terrible. There's little to no indication of how much time passes.
Ok I'm excited to see what happens next...I think Fancy might be in more hot water then boiled rice LOL
Parts of this story definitely have potential, mostly regarding exploration of how the Society works, but there are a painful number of typos and the pacing is absolutely terrible. There's little to no indication of how much time passes.