Hmm, this story seems interesting so far, I found a few missing words and even fewer overused themes... but so far it seems to be good.
However, calling the magic 'Qi' and creating a whole concept around it is unique, at least for me, so that is a big plus. The creature - and what it done to that pony - is strange, I can only guess how it survived: I'm settling between a cryo-chamber or self-preservation via the inner Qi, creating a protective field or state.
Nevertheless, I need more info to work with, so, since you got my attention... Write more!
You have captured my interest so I'll put the story in my read later section and wait to see if I will fave it
4745610 thank you for considering my story
i will follow..and see were this goes
Hmm, this story seems interesting so far, I found a few missing words and even fewer overused themes... but so far it seems to be good.
However, calling the magic 'Qi' and creating a whole concept around it is unique, at least for me, so that is a big plus.
The creature - and what it done to that pony - is strange, I can only guess how it survived: I'm settling between a cryo-chamber or self-preservation via the inner Qi, creating a protective field or state.
Nevertheless, I need more info to work with, so, since you got my attention...
Write more!
-Zeph
So far I'm really liking it. Keep up the good work.
Why thank you for the comment and likes good sirs and ladies. The more joy and entertainment I bring the more I feel accomplished and happy.
Am I the only one who thought it should be "WRYYYYYYYYYY"?
No it's not. Qi and magic are completely distinct from each other.
Interesting...
I like it
..........Something seems familiar here.....
Well maybe it's nothing, its worth a further read
The game is a foot off the ground. Now, the ground needs to meet the hoof.
Bro thats racist