Entry 4
Dear Diary,
You will not believe what just happened today. Never in a bajillion years!
Alright, I'll tell you. TRITON IS COMING TO EQUESTRIA!!!
He's here to study the ecology and biology for their underwater systems, and mummy and daddy are moving him into the room next to mine!
OMERGERSH!
Anyways, I have to go now. I need to look pretty for when Triton comes, maybe even sexy.
I'm sorry! Mummy doesn't let me use that word.
After that, I hafta help decorate his new room. I also plan on digging a hole between his room and mine so that we can chat and stuff. Maybe I'll hafta move my bed. I dunno.
Gotta go!
Tia Solar
Entry 5
Dear Diary,
Triton came today. He is even hotter than he was before! He's staying for a few years, which is plenty of time for me and him to get together! Besides, he's only two years older than me! A few years could either mean 3 years or 5 years, and since I'm almost eleven, by the time he leaves, we should be in a steady, coltfriend/fillyfriend relationship! Ha!
When he came, he greeted mummy and daddy, and then he sees me-a wonder in colour. I dyed my mane pastel green, blue and purple for the occasion. He told me I looked prettier than last time he saw me. And that it wasn't just the mane.
He kissed my hoof again, and gave me a hug, and then, according to plan, I took him to his new room. And I didn't mention mine was next to it until the last second.
I'm tired. I'll go to sleep now.
Night night!
Tia Solar
Something that irks me with this is the lack of exposition that explains the background. Rarity and Spike getting together? Flash Sentry being Twilight's boyfriend out of nowhere?
While this and fact that Celestia sounds like the modern 12 year old instead of using the old Equish that we had learned of its existence in the first chapter has jarred me, this does have my interest. I'll follow this, for now.
4853085 I'm sorry. I forgot to explain that Twilight used a translating spell from Old Equuish to Modern Equuish. Thanks for bringing it up!
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If there are any weird greentext areas, please don't click. I don't know, but something happened to my computer recently, and now there are popups everywhere.
Thanks for your support!
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