Better, his intelligence is progressing as the game memorys are starting to kick in. Side note: Will the protagonist get fellings for Dash. Maybe even love her?
Working on the next chapter, 500 words. I have an important event to attend tomorrow night after school, so I might not be able to work on the next chapter. I apologize for my extremely short chapters, I will try to improve that as the story progresses. I will have 3 days to work on it come Friday, so I may be able to publish the next chapter, I thank you all for such wonderful feedback, and if you could spread this story, I would be even more grateful. Thank you.
I have finished working on chapter 7. With 2700 words, I think you'll like it a lot. I just need my friend to proof read it and I'll publish it. Expect it this weekend.
I want to see the battle with the first dragon! I might actually start a new game in Skyrim just for the hell of it!
Better, his intelligence is progressing as the game memorys are starting to kick in.
Side note: Will the protagonist get fellings for Dash. Maybe even love her?
I dunno, maybe. But that's for later chapters, isn't it?
583111 Yes, I am planning to have Alex have feelings for Rainbow Dash. I myself wonder how that will turn out.
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Warning "Grammar Nazi ahead".When the guy gets to Dragonsreach and opens the door,the "Illuminating" on the sentence after that is lower cased.Also,I will continue to point out error's when and if I see them.
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Have i told you your a genius? I haven't! Well good sir ur a genius Dashie and alex ftw
584139 Thank you :3
Working on the next chapter, 500 words. I have an important event to attend tomorrow night after school, so I might not be able to work on the next chapter. I apologize for my extremely short chapters, I will try to improve that as the story progresses. I will have 3 days to work on it come Friday, so I may be able to publish the next chapter, I thank you all for such wonderful feedback, and if you could spread this story, I would be even more grateful. Thank you.
Wow, and I play Skyrim. Gotta get on the meme bandwagon for this one:
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Update
I have finished working on chapter 7. With 2700 words, I think you'll like it a lot. I just need my friend to proof read it and I'll publish it. Expect it this weekend.