Dude please. This is Skyrim only with ponys and stupid human. If he HAS played skyrim the he should know better. He should know what they are about to say, about to do and whats going to happen next. The only part of confident this character HAS is there is a dragon called Alduin and healing magic. This is your Dovahkiin? he is a Dumbahkiin
469587 Sorry mate but thats how I am. It just angers me to see a character that HAS played skyrim and dosn't even know half of it. Everybody remembers something, some not as much, for me i remember very MUCH and like Skyrim. The felling of someone who knows nothing about something that he/she does every day is like getting your limbs get crushed with a daedric warhammer
Well, he woke up in Manerim(Skyrim), and just because he played a game similar to the place he's in, he has no actual in-person experience of the place, which explains why he acts like that.
At first you called the place where the people go when they die "sovngarde" then you called it "saddlegarde".Also,in the third paragraph, the "r" in later is spaced out so it looks like this:late r.Sorry if I'm being a files.sharenator.com/grammar_nazi_RE_the_womans_role-s369x540-56390.jpg
Didn't add all of the escape to this one because I felt it would be kind of tedious and boring. Will make up for it in the next chapter.
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I'm guessing he has to have his armor custom made.
Longer please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
467094 Yep, custom made armor.
467161 Anything you want me to add to the story, to make it longer?
Just make everything in the story more detailed and just use more of the plot in each chapter
and more violence!
So says flutter shy!!!!!!!
Dude please. This is Skyrim only with ponys and stupid human. If he HAS played skyrim the he should know better. He should know what they are about to say, about to do and whats going to happen next. The only part of confident this character HAS is there is a dragon called Alduin and healing magic.
This is your Dovahkiin? he is a Dumbahkiin
468582 Hey bro, this is my first fic. I appreciate constructive criticism, but now you're just being mean.
469587 Sorry mate but thats how I am. It just angers me to see a character that HAS played skyrim and dosn't even know half of it. Everybody remembers something, some not as much, for me i remember very MUCH and like Skyrim. The felling of someone who knows nothing about something that he/she does every day is like getting your limbs get crushed with a daedric warhammer
Well, he woke up in Manerim(Skyrim), and just because he played a game similar to the place he's in, he has no actual in-person experience of the place, which explains why he acts like that.
Chapter 5 is coming along great at nearly 1000 words.
At first you called the place where the people go when they die "sovngarde" then you called it "saddlegarde".Also,in the third paragraph, the "r" in later is spaced out so it looks like this:late r.Sorry if I'm being a files.sharenator.com/grammar_nazi_RE_the_womans_role-s369x540-56390.jpg