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KISS ME!!
Make the chapters longer C:
Other than that
i want your babies
Why is Alex a complete DUMNASS in the begining. If he have played skyrim (like me) then he should know everything from point A to point B. Yes I know that this might be a big shock to him but come on, he should know better. If he hasn't gotten that far in the game then that would be a conception but by the looks of it he has gotten pretty far in the game. The only other explanation is that he is a complete and utter DUMNASS
Still liked it though
Chapter 4 is on the way. Expect it soon.
Were merry men of skyrim
So sturdy and so stout
You weak livered milk drinkers can let you thirst run dry
But there is one drink that we will seek untilthe day we die
Drinking mead in the halls of whiterun
The maidens and the men
We'll swig our brew until we spew and fill our mugs again!!!!!
Didn't add all of the escape to this one because I felt it would be kind of tedious and boring. Will make up for it in the next chapter.
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I'm guessing he has to have his armor custom made.
Longer please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
467094 Yep, custom made armor.
467161 Anything you want me to add to the story, to make it longer?
Just make everything in the story more detailed and just use more of the plot in each chapter
and more violence!
So says flutter shy!!!!!!!
Dude please. This is Skyrim only with ponys and stupid human. If he HAS played skyrim the he should know better. He should know what they are about to say, about to do and whats going to happen next. The only part of confident this character HAS is there is a dragon called Alduin and healing magic.
This is your Dovahkiin? he is a Dumbahkiin
468582 Hey bro, this is my first fic. I appreciate constructive criticism, but now you're just being mean.
469587 Sorry mate but thats how I am. It just angers me to see a character that HAS played skyrim and dosn't even know half of it. Everybody remembers something, some not as much, for me i remember very MUCH and like Skyrim. The felling of someone who knows nothing about something that he/she does every day is like getting your limbs get crushed with a daedric warhammer
Well, he woke up in Manerim(Skyrim), and just because he played a game similar to the place he's in, he has no actual in-person experience of the place, which explains why he acts like that.
Chapter 5 is coming along great at nearly 1000 words.
Yep i died from awsomeness
Whitetrot. Wow, more and more Skyrim/pony puns. Keep this up, and you will make me burst my sides laughing.
Although it's a great story.
Thanks alot guys!
Is Mai'q the liar going to be in here too? Or some variation of him?
500580 You bet your flank he is. Thanks for that idea bro!
Is sheogarth (not sure if spelled right) going to be discord?
500604 Yup. Azura will be Nightmare Moon, maybe. I intend to have her peaceful.
500609 Hmmm Talos..... Stendarr..... uh..... Sheogarth..... Darn it I forgot the rest..... Hircine could be cerberus or something....
Can't wait for the final fight in Sovngarde.
500777 Saddlegarde :P
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Keep it sovngarde for the sake of legacy. And skyrim.
500884 Alrighty then.
500885
Yay.
I like skyrim and now Manerim would be great to see. Now if there was a mod that made skyrim like Manerim, that would be epic. You can get your story straight off of it.
Better. For the names of places and creatures in the pony elder scroll dimension wouldn't the prodigy laugh at some of names and even say what the other is going to say?
I would like to see that. Then he would be "Trollahkiin" 
So when can i expect the next update my goodman
545711 Friday, hopefully. Sorry to keep everypony waiting.
Dont worry know rush i was just curious
Replace that know with a no heh heh
Sorry guys, I was not able to post the update. Sorry for the wait but I promise it will be up in the next 24 hours.
I have a bit of good news guys, I am already at 1,018 words so far for chapter 6. Hopefully it will be 1500 words.
I want to see the battle with the first dragon! I might actually start a new game in Skyrim just for the hell of it!
Better, his intelligence is progressing as the game memorys are starting to kick in.
Side note: Will the protagonist get fellings for Dash. Maybe even love her? 
My weekend nights in a nut shell.
I dunno, maybe. But that's for later chapters, isn't it?
583111 Yes, I am planning to have Alex have feelings for Rainbow Dash. I myself wonder how that will turn out.
At first you called the place where the people go when they die "sovngarde" then you called it "saddlegarde".Also,in the third paragraph, the "r" in later is spaced out so it looks like this:late r.Sorry if I'm being a files.sharenator.com/grammar_nazi_RE_the_womans_role-s369x540-56390.jpg
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Warning "Grammar Nazi ahead".When the guy gets to Dragonsreach and opens the door,the "Illuminating" on the sentence after that is lower cased.Also,I will continue to point out error's when and if I see them.
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Have i told you your a genius? I haven't! Well good sir ur a genius Dashie and alex ftw
584139 Thank you :3
Working on the next chapter, 500 words. I have an important event to attend tomorrow night after school, so I might not be able to work on the next chapter. I apologize for my extremely short chapters, I will try to improve that as the story progresses. I will have 3 days to work on it come Friday, so I may be able to publish the next chapter, I thank you all for such wonderful feedback, and if you could spread this story, I would be even more grateful. Thank you.