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i wonder if twilight will know about the ring there
7007746 Well, if Celestia were to ever find out that her own student has been performing child abuse (physically and emotionally) on her own assistant, and even allowed others to do some of the same things towards him without even so much as telling one of them to stop, then my guess would be that she'd take Spike away from Twilight and let him either live with her or send him back to his real parents. That is if Celestia actually does believe in the magic of friendship instead of going back and forth between what really counts as "friendship" and doing the complete opposite like a hypocrite.
You know, I had just finished reading this chapter, and so far, I have to say that I'm very unhappy....
Very unhappy that this has gotten 31 dislikes and only 53 likes. This is utter genius, and frankly, even though your fiction is similar to mine, I find yours to be somewhat better. Your characters are pretty friggin hilarious. Sure there are things like "How do ponies know how to make TVs, and Playstations, and they can text without having a phone tower nearby that would connect to verizon or whatever phone service they decided to go through with at home," but those are just technicalities that I'm pointing out just for the hell of it, which tells me that you're just having fun with writing this fic too much to even care (which is something I respect). I also love how Jeffrie is a "take no shit from anyone" type, but also knows who and when to pick on. If I have to call out on one real issue I have with this story, it would be Jeffrie's friends. They both seem to be clones. The only difference would be appearances and the type of girls they're into but that's pretty much it. They're just standing behind Jeffrie and agree with him mostly, and they seem to also be there for him to pick on. And if Jeffrie's not around, they start to become Jeffrie a little. If I could give one advice, that would be to start giving them more of a unique dynamic character that would make one not so similar to the other. But this is just me talking.
Other than that, I say this story is pretty high quality and is greatly underrated. I mean C'MON PEOPLE!! Start throwin some thumbs up!
Keep up the good work. I'm quite a fan.