As awesome it would be to see a big daddy ripout some organs i think would be good idea to add other video game cherecters because as you have shown in the first chapter the big daddy is killable also what would stop him from killing the ponies if they were to come close to the little sister so my suggestion would be to add other video game charecters.
I have a list of charecters for you (this is you story so don't have to listen to me) 1. The Raincoat Killer from deadliy premention 2. Faust from guilty gear 3. Jack and subject delta 4.Jacket from Hotline Miami 5. Jason Brody from Far Cry 3 These are my suggestion (and before ask why don't write these? It's because im more fit for wrighting poems)
this story drills into my mind
Okay, you have me intrested, hopefully we might see more development.
You my good sir has caught my intrest
Thanks to all of you. you're all so nice
4690060 It's suppose to be a pun....
yah I know it's horrible
To people who disliked this: What if I told you it is not a bad story just because it is a Fall of Equestria crossover?
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As awesome it would be to see a big daddy ripout some organs i think would be good idea to add other video game cherecters because as you have shown in the first chapter the big daddy is killable also what would stop him from killing the ponies if they were to come close to the little sister so my suggestion would be to add other video game charecters.
I have a list of charecters for you (this is you story so don't have to listen to me)
1. The Raincoat Killer from deadliy premention
2. Faust from guilty gear
3. Jack and subject delta
4.Jacket from Hotline Miami
5. Jason Brody from Far Cry 3
These are my suggestion (and before ask why don't write these? It's because im more fit for wrighting poems)
Yeah, a Big Daddy is going to kill some caribou ass!!!
4696616 Because Jack and Delta don't have a bonded little girl to look after anymore, I don't even know the other ones
4697367 look them up on youtube but i only suggested them
4698063 I used a normal Big Daddy and Little Sister for obvious reasons