I liked the dumb electricity puns, but the clop wasn't very good.

You've got a pretty strong difference in potential there.

Okay, this was good.... Then we got to clop. I don't think that should've been there. Kind of ruined the story for me. This would've done so much better as a comedy for those with a dark sense of humor, a strict non-sexual comedy.

I won't downvote, but it's not getting an up vote either. I likes the first chapter and that was it.

Much like the other comments, I could've done without the clop, but i thought the rest was nice. You get my upvote.

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Alright, sensing a theme here. Can't and won't please everyone, but there will be plenty more scenes of them on dates, conversing, etc, and I'll leave the clop few and far between. That being said, it will still be here and there. I should probably label clop chapters as such or put a warning so other readers can skip it if they wish.

Well I guess I'm the odd man out because I rather enjoyed the clop scene. It could do with a bit less comedy and a bit more sensual dialog but other than that I found it very stimulating.
The story is sweet and pulled off very pleasantly for such a dark topic. I love how confident you chose to portray Amp, not as some sad victim but as a regular pony with strange circumstances. Her coltfriend seems so cute I get why she likes him.

The limbless pony continued his assault on his helpless cock

continued her assault.
All in all great I love it all so far. Favorited and liked.

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Pyrrhic victory, duh

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Thanks for the feedback and pointing out the error

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I aim to please.