I like how Octavia isn't portrayed as some evil horrible pony. It was a very delicate balance to strike and I think you did well in managing to hit it. I look forward to the next chapter.
7020558 And I really hope it won't devolve into simple hard clop, that it would really be _the talk_. With deep meaning, emotions and other good things that move plot forward.
“Ugh. Four hundred bratty kids in a gymnasium, and each and every one of them came up and wants to hear the Swan Gallop. I fucking refuse to play that trash.”
oh, that made think of a gag in a crazy comic called "yafgc": a Bard is playing at a Tavern, and someone asks him if he knows a certain tune. "yes, milord! every word! which is precisely why i WON'T be performing it tonight!" the whole tavern cracked up!
Syndicalism and collectivising in *my* clop fics? Stop, I can only get so hard!
Aside from that, I am absolutely loving this. I adore how your clop is SO MUCH MORE than ponies getting their rocks off. You have background, you have character development, you have three-dimensional portrayals of antagonists! It's gorgeous!
I like how Octavia isn't portrayed as some evil horrible pony. It was a very delicate balance to strike and I think you did well in managing to hit it. I look forward to the next chapter.
HA! In a female dominated society, a male claiming to be raped is actually taken seriously. Kind of sad, really.
7010500 Thank you. I try.
I can't wait for the next chapter, I wanna read that Talk between Vinyl and Octavia!
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I really hope that's what happens.
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And I really hope it won't devolve into simple hard clop, that it would really be _the talk_. With deep meaning, emotions and other good things that move plot forward.
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Sorry to disappoint, but The Talk is going to happen off-camera. Consequences will show up later.
These cliff hangers are killing me.
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My condolences. Have your next of kin contact my people and we'll send a nice wreath.
(The plot will progress later this week, once my trusty proofreader gets a spare moment to go typohunting).
oh, that made think of a gag in a crazy comic called "yafgc": a Bard is playing at a Tavern, and someone asks him if he knows a certain tune. "yes, milord! every word! which is precisely why i WON'T be performing it tonight!" the whole tavern cracked up!
Syndicalism and collectivising in *my* clop fics? Stop, I can only get so hard!
Aside from that, I am absolutely loving this. I adore how your clop is SO MUCH MORE than ponies getting their rocks off. You have background, you have character development, you have three-dimensional portrayals of antagonists! It's gorgeous!
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Thank you!