A being from the stars seeks the ultimate hunt. Can Equestria's greatest heroines overcome the Huntsman and his powers? Or will it fall to his great hunger? Warning: contains adult and fetish elements.
I find this series rather refreshing, and the diversion to different possible outcomes actually suits this pretty well. It generally gives the people what they want.
Some of the best, intangible things about vore is the sensation of doom for the one being ingested. Blueblood's scene is one of my favorite moments for how long the implications of his fate were allowed to simmer (ha). Twilight ultimately deciding the best they could do was use the time he was being consumed to strategize... that's great, seriously.
Of course, the gonzo nature of him cooking and eating live ponies, roasting them on spits and baking them into pies... that's never really been my thing... but I know it's others'.
But while I know this guy is supposed to be sympathetic and merciful, and complex... it DOES ruin some of the mood that the pony getting eaten always descends into this blissful state before passing out peacefully.
Admittedly, you did have him get uber-pissed at those dragons, but that went into hard-vore ripping and tearing territory.
I dunno, it might be nice if someone like Rainbow Dash took him on, lost, and either refused to submit in peace, or panics and is consumed in agony. It's a little disappointing that all of them are so willing or honorbound.
Well I do have to balance characterization and the detail of the process, but believe me...it won't be all easy for some of them. Especially the next chapter. I'm glad it so intrigues you, though!
I find this series rather refreshing, and the diversion to different possible outcomes actually suits this pretty well. It generally gives the people what they want.
Some of the best, intangible things about vore is the sensation of doom for the one being ingested. Blueblood's scene is one of my favorite moments for how long the implications of his fate were allowed to simmer (ha). Twilight ultimately deciding the best they could do was use the time he was being consumed to strategize... that's great, seriously.
Of course, the gonzo nature of him cooking and eating live ponies, roasting them on spits and baking them into pies... that's never really been my thing... but I know it's others'.
But while I know this guy is supposed to be sympathetic and merciful, and complex... it DOES ruin some of the mood that the pony getting eaten always descends into this blissful state before passing out peacefully.
Admittedly, you did have him get uber-pissed at those dragons, but that went into hard-vore ripping and tearing territory.
I dunno, it might be nice if someone like Rainbow Dash took him on, lost, and either refused to submit in peace, or panics and is consumed in agony. It's a little disappointing that all of them are so willing or honorbound.
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Well I do have to balance characterization and the detail of the process, but believe me...it won't be all easy for some of them. Especially the next chapter. I'm glad it so intrigues you, though!