Needs quite a bit of editing—there is at least one spelling, grammar, or punctuation error in nearly every sentence.

I'm sorry if this doesn't get your fancy my first fic and it will improve later just checking how also testing the way I'm working into it so I do apologize for the lack of perfection and neat writing. I don't have a whole lot of time for just myself working on this fic it will progress slowly reaching for perfection takes time it won't be right the first time some do because they took their time into it I don't have much so I'm not at my best for neat writing.

4635650 nobody's perfect
so take your time to write it , i'll follow it to see how it's going to progress

Diamond dust think you for your support.

When there are multiple errors in the description it doesn't bode well for the rest of the story. Im not really sure how this managed to get approved, The spelling and grammar are atrocious.

4635033 You should be ashamed of yourself.

4636075 sorry I'm getting use to a new thing in my life not much for research for technology and sites like this