Woohoo another amazing chapter from you (even with the minor typos, but hey noone can prevent typos happening ) Overall I really like this story, it's my number 1 favorite story and I'm looking forward to new chapters
Really wish the scenes in this story weren't so short. There just feels like there is so much potential that could be exploited and made into a masterpiece, unfortunately it just feels a little rushed. However, I just love the story so much that I end up making scenes in my head about the interactions between characters that you haven't writen about. I'm just wondering, do you plan to write a redux of this story? And if you don't, could I have a chance to rewrite and expand on the scenes of this story?
Clever you. You thought about Twilight time travelling and going the past like this since chapter, what, chapter 3, since you made Chrysi ask Twilight "Have you returned yet?" I've read this story now 8 times Very clever, you have my thanks for awesome story, and my praise for awesome ideas! (I can't stop reading this over, and over again, seriously, I have a problem)
*krhm* I know this may sound rude, but if you are on hiatus, please put it on that, and if you've quitted (which I surely hope not) put it on cancelled. Just to let us know
I want to note that discord accuses twilight of setting him up to fight the sisters, when in reality that was their original mission to begin with. So i don't know what he is accusing her of.
Woohoo another amazing chapter from you (even with the minor typos, but hey noone can prevent typos happening ) Overall I really like this story, it's my number 1 favorite story and I'm looking forward to new chapters
Really wish the scenes in this story weren't so short. There just feels like there is so much potential that could be exploited and made into a masterpiece, unfortunately it just feels a little rushed. However, I just love the story so much that I end up making scenes in my head about the interactions between characters that you haven't writen about.
I'm just wondering, do you plan to write a redux of this story? And if you don't, could I have a chance to rewrite and expand on the scenes of this story?
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I only made scenes too advance the story of foreshadow things to come. If you want to expand, go ahead.
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If you remake it can you let us know so we can look it up
Clever you.
You thought about Twilight time travelling and going the past like this since chapter, what, chapter 3, since you made Chrysi ask Twilight "Have you returned yet?"
I've read this story now 8 times
Very clever, you have my thanks for awesome story, and my praise for awesome ideas!
(I can't stop reading this over, and over again, seriously, I have a problem)
"Ask and you shall recieve"
Then I ask for new chapter
Please?
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Please?
Don't tell me this is a dead story?
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Not even close. Just takes a while.
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Yay
Soo... When could we possibly be expecting
the spanish inquisitionthe next chapter?I been waiting for a while and was wondering if there was any update on the next chapter
Are you still making the next chapter or not just wanted to know since I having be wondering about it since this one first came out
when can we expect the next chapter?
*krhm*
I know this may sound rude, but if you are on hiatus, please put it on that, and if you've quitted (which I surely hope not) put it on cancelled. Just to let us know
When is the new chapter going to be realist? I can’t stop reading it over again and again
If this is dead please set it as such so i can stop waiting :(
I want to note that discord accuses twilight of setting him up to fight the sisters, when in reality that was their original mission to begin with. So i don't know what he is accusing her of.