This pleases me very much so good sir. Keep up the good work, but it makes me wonder. Does Celestia recognize Twilight when she hatches Spike, or does it take time or does she think she can change her before it happens or does she keep thinking that it couldn't possibly be true or.... Well you can just colour me very interested in how this terns out.
Wonder if there are two Twilights then in the future or is Twilight's death soon?
7844254 What has got your boot raped up in confuzzlment? Twilight went back to.... the beginning. Met or made every threat to equestria and its future rules while ruling over a small earth pony tribe for a while that was where Somber originated.
simples! Right... guess i have just gotten used to complicated plots, sudden turn of events and, bamboozle, time travel.
Ooh, and Celestia ,Luna, Discord and Faust are aliens I belive
Now that I have finished reading this chapter, I can say that Sombra wasn't pretending to be nice to Twilight. He is genuinely inlove with Twilight even though she is a bitch to him because he also knows that the older/future Twilight will return to him in time since they made a promise to meet again.
8290246 Ok thanks for information please keep us updated if possible. Plus here an idea. The whole reason. I found this fanfiction was because some one made a fanfiction reading on YouTube of your first chapter. And they had voices for each line like a actual show. I think you should maybe try something similar fir all your chapters. It was great
This pleases me very much so good sir. Keep up the good work, but it makes me wonder. Does Celestia recognize Twilight when she hatches Spike, or does it take time or does she think she can change her before it happens or does she keep thinking that it couldn't possibly be true or.... Well you can just colour me very interested in how this terns out.
Wonder if there are two Twilights then in the future or is Twilight's death soon?
Guess spoilers
Oh you have no idea about the shit storm I'm going to rain on you Twilight
Well your going to pay for taking away the stallion I raped as a child until he finally loved me!!!
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7840732 Too bad I can't favorite comments. You'd be number 1
7840732 if I had to guess we've already met twilights older self.
Im kinda lost in THIS chapter.
7844254 What has got your boot raped up in confuzzlment? Twilight went back to.... the beginning. Met or made every threat to equestria and its future rules while ruling over a small earth pony tribe for a while that was where Somber originated.
simples! Right... guess i have just gotten used to complicated plots, sudden turn of events and, bamboozle, time travel.
Ooh, and Celestia ,Luna, Discord and Faust are aliens I belive
7845550 A+ for the pony scholar
This is a great chapter. Keep up the gr3at work and hope you have some fun with it.
7841309 Na, we are number one!
This is awesome! yay equestrian history for dummies :P
Shit this is almost as mind-fuckie as the "would you kindly" explanation in Bioshock!!!! MORE I NEED MORE!!!!
OMG This story is SO GOOD!!!
Now that I have finished reading this chapter, I can say that Sombra wasn't pretending to be nice to Twilight. He is genuinely inlove with Twilight even though she is a bitch to him because he also knows that the older/future Twilight will return to him in time since they made a promise to meet again.
I was just wondering when or if you are working on the next chapter and when it might come out.
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I'm working on two chapter's at the moment but I'm not quite sure when they'll be done.
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Ok thanks for information please keep us updated if possible. Plus here an idea. The whole reason. I found this fanfiction was because some one made a fanfiction reading on YouTube of your first chapter. And they had voices for each line like a actual show. I think you should maybe try something similar fir all your chapters. It was great
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Good guess on what happened with this fanfic but you're so far off. Would you like to try again?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2Eer76Ndfrg this is the fanfiction read i was talking about the whole reason why i looked up your fanfiction was due to this
Double negative