5813870 Ditto about sex.
I am not sure what to say... There are some blemishes in the grammar but otherwise my question is who this random Shela is what species she is and what do they mean when they say "have you returned?" I guess we're not done yet? Are they talking about the real Twilight?

I like this. The best way this can end is with no-one else dying from here on, and Twi just gives a big 'fuck you' to everyone who doesn't like her new self. This could make a few more chapters.

guard number 42

My reaction when I read it:

Heh, I got this reference ^^

I was borderline begging for advice

I was on the borderline of begging for advice

Maybe this edit?

5957428 I'm not much of a grammar person as you can tell, but if that's really how it's supposed to be then...done.

Please update this story soon, I really want more please

I really hope that you make another chapter soon because I really like them. Hope you keep on writing.

He chose the latter of the two.

you meant Former

Rag

Did he cast a spell that changes hatred to love?