Ok, about a quarter way through chapter 2 I had to stop write this: DA FUCK? To much change! way to fast! this is NOT the twilight I knew! Back to reading...
End of chapter 2: So far, great story with an interesting concept that appears to be well executed, I'm seriously starting to worry for twilight's sake though but that's more of a complement to your writing skill than a problem with the story. I kinda like the shy book nerd and could relate to her that way (I also like to read a lot and tend to be a shut in). This story emotional stresses me...
well this is horrifying! we are literally seeing (in my opinion) the worst way to die you dont. you become someone else and that terrifies me, to feel my mind, body, hell; my very soul changing, slowly slipping away from me... *shivers* in the words of Jacob: you died long ago, your body just hasnt caught up yet...
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This is really tragic when you think about it. We're basically watching Twilight, the real Twilight, die.
Sad.
giggety.
What is this, Chaos doesn't even
Ummmmm?
... AND favorite.
Wait, WHAT?!!
Ok, about a quarter way through chapter 2 I had to stop write this: DA FUCK? To much change! way to fast! this is NOT the twilight I knew!
Back to reading...
End of chapter 2: So far, great story with an interesting concept that appears to be well executed, I'm seriously starting to worry for twilight's sake though but that's more of a complement to your writing skill than a problem with the story. I kinda like the shy book nerd and could relate to her that way (I also like to read a lot and tend to be a shut in). This story emotional stresses me...
Uhhhh ummm... hmmm
415803 That's an incredibly depressing way to put this...
well this is horrifying!
we are literally seeing (in my opinion) the worst way to die
you dont. you become someone else
and that terrifies me, to feel my mind, body, hell; my very soul changing, slowly slipping away from me... *shivers*
in the words of Jacob: you died long ago, your body just hasnt caught up yet...
4347684 Aw, that's cute. You still think the continuity of your consciousness is real.