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I'm about to read this, wish me luck.
allons-y!
Edit:
This is good.
You are planning to rewrite the whole thing, but changing the main character's ridiculously silly name and the weapons he wakes up with wasn't the very first thing you thought of? Are you planning to improve the story or are you just updating the prose? Although you're definitely doing a good job of the latter already, it won't matter much if the actual content still makes everyone think of a 14-year-olds self insert fanfic about his favourite weeaboo fightan gaem.
Nice.
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While not EXACTLY the kind of response that I was looking for, at least you were honest, and for that I say thank you.
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That's the kind of response you ought to be looking for, though. Unless you want to repeat every mistake you made the first time around.
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I apologize. I didn't mean that I disliked the comment, and I am very much happy to have heard of such a comment, regardless of it being what I wanted to hear. Please, if you find anything else worth commenting about, then don't hesitate to do so.
There's lots of reasons people don't keep eye contact besides lying.