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*slowly claps* oh am i looking forward to this. also are we gonna be seeing something to ticondrius and the other fan-made marines soon? or is it still a while until then
Excellent chapter my friend
I Loved this chapter, cant wait for more.
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All will be added, but I do hope that I've tickled your interests good with this chapter.
That's the thing I love about my story, because it is also helped along by those who submit a battle brother.
5635068 true. BATTLE BROTHERS! TOGETHER!!! FOR THE EMPRESSES!!!
Interesting set up. I have a proposition for a marine OC. Terminator Sgt. Knight of the Ultramarine's 1st Company. Armed with a storm bolter and power sword. As honorable as his namesake and more merciful than most Space Marines, though not to the point of foolishness. He believes that some he fights may not be beyond redemption, especially those who only fight because their forced corruption makes them.
What do you think?
5645280 I like it, and he could be a great character for a plot I have later in the story when many more threats are introduced
5646761 I look forward to it.
5646761 There's one other thing I wanted to add to my OC, if it's not too late. The scene in chapter 5 where Kris/Astelan kills the changeling impersonating Blueblood, Knight would've been disappointed at his actions, if for no other reason than Celestia disproved it and he brushed it off like nothing. Just trying to flush out Knight's character enough to make him seem more real.
I have yet to say how happy and thankful i am for you putting Tenebras in the story and i would like to express my gratitude now, i did not know if he would be in the story and i was surprised when he was in this latest chapter. Thank you ZephyrStrife and may all of your enemies fall to your blade, LONG LIVE THE EMPRESSES. (also going to say this: MY ARMOR IS CONTEMPT, MY SHIELD IS DISGUST,MY SWORD IS HATRED,IN THE EMPEROR'S NAME LET NONE SURVIVE) derpicdn.net/img/2012/7/4/31212/thumb.jpg
5648869 It actually would have worked, since Astelan grew to have more of a favoring of Luna over Celestia. He may have seen it as a necessary evil to keep the corruption of changelings from spreading no matter how wrong it was.
5648930 I've actually seen that picture before, it's one of my favorites
5649100 The way you put that makes me feel like I should say that Knight wouldn't really favor one princess over the other, at first. His duty is to both, and that is his first priority, always, but if one princess approves of his style and attitude more than the other, then he'll start favoring one. Hope I'm not being overbearing or something.
5656228 Oh no, it's actually completely understandable. I actually do have a small offer for his character.
5656372 Looking forward to it.
5656385 sent it in a PM
i cant wait to see if Decem is also added to the story, and remember kids you can never have enough dakka
5658766 I completely agree, not enough dakka, although I love that in my stories... I'm experimenting with ways to truly extract the feelz.
Teh warp.......