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Forgot to do this, I've noticed I've gained more negative votes since I did the sex scene.
Let me clear something up. I made a notice and comment asking IF and WHEN it would be okay to make a sex scene.
If you didn't want that in this story then you should've TOLD ME, seriously.
When my negative votes skyrocket I'm a little pissed. what pisses me off is when little FUCKS vote it down even after I FUCKING say to tell me what wrong and they just FUCKING leave without FUCKING telling me what's FUCKING wrong. Don't just act like it'll just FUCKING work out the way you want. I asked that question for a reason dammit! If you don't comment on a major game changing inquiry that could be effected greatly by you addition then don't cry, bitch, and moan when you don't and what you didn't want happens you incompetent little shit!
Im waiting for chap #69 lol
Hoping you do "something special" then.
587249 me too, I'll make sure it's open for...well, yeah.
Last I checked you had 30 likes and only 22 dislikes. Now I see that that gap has greatly changed for the worse. I know that you are pissed (coming from your comment) but I don't think that should get to you. You should be happy that you are able to write something that you enjoy and that it can be shared with everyone here. Yes the trolls or "LITTLE FUCKS" will downvote it for reasons unknown but I can guarantee you that everyone who did like your story will stick by you. So just ignore them cus well "Haters gonna Hate" and write to the best you can.
Sorry for my ranting but you are in a sour mood so just tryin to help since this is one of my favorite stories. Well final thing to see if you do kind of cheer up from Team America. There will always be three kinds of people in this world, dicks, pussies, and assholes
587509 I appreciate what you're doing. But it still gets to me when I see the likes decrease and switch over to the dislikes and I've been seeing that. The only thing to really raise my hopes on this being as popular as I'd like it to be is for darkest to get word out "It's a really good story." but shit's always liked to fuck with me, so when the shit really starts to fuck with me over something I really care about then I'm well in my rights to be upset. It would piss any writer off if someone did a review of their work and just said it's shit without saying it's shit. It makes me feel like they're scared of what I'll think. All I want is there to be criticism. I enjoy praise but it would taste all the sweeter if I got something to keep up with and follow.
And trust me, there's varying degrees of the dicks, pussies, and assholes.
Like the Wankers, the Nobs, the Bell ends, dozens.
This is getting a little long huh? Quick ask, Are you liking the clop? If so, how could it be better?
587653 Ok I just read over your Clop chapters and will try to criticize it. (notice: never reviewed anything ever before.)
First off with Chapter 48, it was great chapter! (don't know if you ever wrote a Clop chapter) the way you executed the sequences were also good and you took it slowly unlike some others who write these. Though there was some things that I thought strange in some of the paragraphs. I don't remember what paragraph but I do remember you described "I felt her body shake in a shudder as she received her own pleasure from it." I don't remember the rest but I don't think that shake and shudder needed to be out together. I think that you could have just made it shudder and took away shake to help shorten and simplify the sentence. "I felt her body shudder as she received her own pleasure from it." Either that or just put shake. That was just something that was itching at the back of my head and I thought that it would sound better if it was just shortened. There are also just some small places too that you do that in the rest if the chapter but really I don't think it's a bad thing since most of the chapter is well written and well described. (hehe, described)
As for Chapter 53, there wasn't really anything wrong with it. With those two chapters I would say that they would be on par with most Clop fics and that you succeeded in making a successful one.
Alright so that's what I think but just saying this is my first review and thoughts so don't take this all to seriously because I bet if anyone did a review it would put mine to shame. So yeah the Clop chapters were great with just some things being overly described in some sentences. The execution of the story Clop was great, you gave the right feelings to the characters during their uh, Clop, and you took it slowly to show how the characters felt for eachother at the right moments. So good job at that. Um yeah so again if you think this review is poor then just ignore it since basically you just had a noob review and give his thoughts.
588229 (Notice: Never written anything like it before.)
actually I'd say you put it well.
To be honest, I went over the chapter a few times and changed stuff up to try to make it as good as possible, and of coarse mad some goofs. I'll eventually get around to it and change some stuff up or fix what needs to be like the others.
I had worries it would seem a little weak if anything.
I'm terribly sorry, mister author, but seeing you go all mad about people disliking without saying anything makes me want to do so, too...
I'm a horrible person... don't worry, I'll refrain from doing so.