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I'm gonna work off that later. It really sucked going from the nice date to having him shish-kibabed and flung against a wall.
Any thoughts? Something I missed or screwed up?
Enjoy the late release, I'm off to my own zone of blur and mindless fuckery.
545855 Nooo! You had the same idea for a nightmare that I put in my story! Oh well either way it was another great chapter.
Strange dreams, no reason, ends with "as I leaned down to kiss Twilight" or something involving leaning and Twi.
Normal chapter!
You know that this is constructive criticizm, right? You're a bit repetetive. It's still good, though.
Happy date. check. Walk home romantically. check. Make out. check. Nearly die and sell soul to devil to get girlfriend back. check. I STILL love this story!