Ripped from my world? Check. Forced into a incredible powerfull, incredible evil looking body? Double check! No idea what happend to me, how I am supoosed to get back home or let alone survive? Tripple check. Okay, watch out Equestria, here I come!
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Good chapter like the story so far
Looking forward to more.
Ther where som spelling mistakes i saw.
Wold help you out but i suck at spelling
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Thanks, thats good to hear.
Yeah, dem nasty little buggers, just sneaking in there when you look the other way.
I appreciate the thought Mr. Wolf.
Only now I understood one thing: Gnarl still gonna say tower need MISTRESS. Even if Overlord is female.
Just because "This is how it always was.". And then Onyx gonna become one. And even if Sara isn't interested, dragoness still gonna tease and embarrass her.
I think I just owned myself fedora.
4278572
Excelent thoughts.
*hands you a fedora.*
Interesting. Please, go on.
4388452
Will do good sir. Glad you like it.
Please feel free to drop further comments, critique or tips.
If you don´t mind...
Soooooo.... Any news on a update to this story? Would like to read more of the shenanigans of The Overlady, her (loyal) Minions and new dragon-lady friend.
Please?
5064946
The new chapter is work in progress. Just hold on a little bit longer. Thank you. m(_ _)m m(- -)m m(_ _)m
the horned Rat bit made me laugh XD
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Then I did my Job well.^^
Skaven ho!
Just finished this chapter(I can be a slow reader) and I can't wait to see what else you have in store. Major props on deviating from the traditional HiE/Displaced formula and trying something new. Lots of potential here. Keep up the good work.
Oh, and a translation of the German parts wouldn't go amiss. Just saying...
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Hey, nothing wrong with reading slowly. Why, thank you.
Finaĺy someone who is german! or atleast knows the language...
Umbra and Onyx are in no life-threatening danger from here until ____ when we catch up with chapter 1 / prologue / Celestia about to burn off her face. So, how do you intend to instill any kind of tension here?
Compliments to the writer. However, I gotta ask,
Who dat?
7750330
Thank you kindly.^^
That is a reference to Luke Skywalker as he appeared in Star Wars Episode 6: Return of the Jedi. Y´know, cause Umbra is seriously channeling her "Dark Force side" here and all. I love to make references like that.
7751368 Oh right, I suppose it was kinda obvious It's just that with all the people with robotic limb replacements- or weapons- throughout media, I was curious if perhaps you were referring to someone else. There's Genos from One Punch Man, Edward Elric, Vash the Stampede... all blonde, all with robotic prosthetics oddly enough.
7751917 no i'm pretty sure it was luke skywalker from star wars :P
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Bingo.^^
a certain TV series about physics and four guys with abysmal social skills.
ah, what show is this?
Poor Dinky... Well done Luna
Damn... Dying in a dream is pretty harsh... Poor woman...
The First Overlord is in her mind i guess...
So Gnarl isnt the first Overlord in disguise observing, guiding and in the end disposing of them for the fun of it?
The boop was so cuuute
Damn... That women had one harsh start to Equestria.
No fun only hardship... I guess she has to work for her happyness. No fluffly unicorns dancing on rainbows to help her
Damn... Running/Fighting with a dragon on a empty stomach wile a dry troat tortures her... Damn...
Also that dragon is inbreeded if you ask me...
Its just sad...
Minons found her... Seems evil founds its way...
Vomit water... Yummy
Psycho Pony That will make a nice first encounter story.
Sooo... Griffon are honor bound warriors?
Very impressive lore...
So MLP have primitiv guns. That will need some seriouse armor mods...
Derpy... Lets snuggle her
Luna? Keep booping that snoot! ♡
Celestia? Give that mare some ear scraches I guess Celestia get denied her cuddles and ear scatches so she was going beserk. . . Perfect logic
Did we get to see Naysay and other pony Supremeist lynched perhaps
Die Greifen haben einen sehr beeindruckenden Kampf geliefert. Schade das es so enden musste...
Das Ende des zweiten Greifen hat mir echt hart die Tränen gebracht. Respekt!
Killing a pony like this? Very nice after that build up. . .
I doubt Dawn realised how dangerous her leader was. The Overlady probably saved her... That kind of poby normaly get opposing ponys in there ranks killed...
Magnificent overall first blood incident.
Umbra... To have a name that is also a race name ( Sombras mother etc ).
So... Did Umbra just got her first friend?...
Friendship is scaly and magic?
Brilliant chapter
4278572
Love the idea.
4278830
Neat
4388452
I hope it runs a longer story and get finished one day
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How about more booping ponys snooty ones we get some ponys that are nicer
5064946
Indeed.
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Was läuft? Alles das nicht steht, geht oder auf dem Boden liegt
7456471
First... Umbra spoils Celestia with cuddels, snuggels, ear scraches and booping that sunny snoot! Than...
SHE STOPS! Stuff like that can get a lonely mare mad
7750330
That referance
7751368
Hot damn women... That was quite the shocking reference