Evan Kelly arrives in Equestria in the most questionable of ways. How is he going to get back home and why are the ponies so colorful? maybe he should do some tests on the pigment concentration in the-OH MY GOD THAT ONE JUST SPOKE!
Just read the whole thing, it was alright but there were a lot of typos. You should be on the lookout for an editor that can help iron out the mistakes It'll make a much better read
Just read the whole thing, it was alright but there were a lot of typos. You should be on the lookout for an editor that can help iron out the mistakes It'll make a much better read