Evan Kelly arrives in Equestria in the most questionable of ways. How is he going to get back home and why are the ponies so colorful? maybe he should do some tests on the pigment concentration in the-OH MY GOD THAT ONE JUST SPOKE!
Like most of the HiE story : the main character is a Mary Sue.
Having told this, the story is at least well-written, the author even managed to make some backstory for the protagonist, the chapter are long enough to have decent descriptions and interractions.
But it's still an awfull Mary Sue character story.
2312796 Depends on what you mean by Marry Sue. Yes Evan is powerful but only certain emotions do certain things for him and in some cases work against him. So he may be a Marry Sue in some cases but not all his problems can be solved by his powers in stressful or spur of the moment situations.
Nice to see another chapter. For the questions for him; How did you get here? What do you eat? Who had told you not to go outside? That's all I can think of, alter these as you see fit.
Like most of the HiE story : the main character is a Mary Sue.
Having told this, the story is at least well-written, the author even managed to make some backstory for the protagonist, the chapter are long enough to have decent descriptions and interractions.
But it's still an awfull Mary Sue character story.
Well, an interesting and very well written chapter, now about the question: Why did you tatto butterflies in your flank?
2312796 Depends on what you mean by Marry Sue. Yes Evan is powerful but only certain emotions do certain things for him and in some cases work against him. So he may be a Marry Sue in some cases but not all his problems can be solved by his powers in stressful or spur of the moment situations.
Nice to see another chapter.
For the questions for him; How did you get here? What do you eat? Who had told you not to go outside? That's all I can think of, alter these as you see fit.