Please comment your opinion!

I should start by saying that, can`t wait for Destiny!
Anyway, It was good and can`t wait for more chapters!
Keep writing!

4130592 Why Thank you! More chapters are coming up soon! Thanks for the read!

Destiny! With Ponies! Set in the future of the once great Equestria, our civilization once spanned the solar system.

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Oh no you didn't.

The game hasn't even been released yet.

I can't wait for this game I already preordered and getting the beta!!! The story is great so far. I can't wait to read more!!!!!!

4130956 Still have to go to school. (Sucks), hopefully another chapter will be up tomorrow. Glad you`re enjoying!

4130744 And Bungie said it`s a free world, which by default means I can write a fanfic.

4130736 Why Not?

4131214
No, i'm not saying you can't. You are completely free to do whatever you want with this fic, as it is your own and nobody can change the fact you have full control over writing it.

It just struck me because, well, that is near-identical to the most popular fic in this fandom, and some people may notice that and not take kindly to it.

I didn't downvote, mind you. Personally i'm rather interested in bungie taking a different direction with their sci-fi concepts. This stuck out because, well, it really wasn't necessary to do. I know you probably liked it or thought the description of the other fic was cool, but emulating another person exactly isn't the best thing to do. Your story is exactly that: your story.

It's a really small thing but I could see a few people who are fairly critical and easy to draw downvotes from passing by and seeing that, then proceeding to leave a dislike for that reason. Maybe they would think you are copying or ripping off the fic, who knows. Maybe they'll just be upset that you didn't take the time to write your own description instead of swapping words with another for the greater part.

Again, i'm not pushing you to change anything. I may suggest a slight change because others probably won't take too kindly to that.

Best of luck writing.

4131327 Oh that...
I am a huge fan of Kkat`s work and have nothing but respect for her. I have read Fallout: Equestria atleast (I counted by the way.) 37 times. But she kinda doesn't have copyright for three words?

4131348
No, but for a comparison:

Destiny! With Ponies! Set in the future of the once great Equestria, our civilization once spanned the solar system.

Fallout. With ponies! Set in an alternate future, one pony must learn to survive in a blasted, poisoned land...

4131213 Nothing saying you can't write a fanfic, but why the hell are you writing one about a game that hasn't even come out yet?
Not trying to come off as hostile, but what's the point?

Meh.
10/17

4131492 I`ll see what I can do. Check back later.