If i had anything to say about this chapter, anyway i could accurately describes my feelings towards this piece of writing, anything at all. it would be..... Yes
Pinkie lay over top of Dash’s chest, practically smothering her, and her lips were everywhere, all at once, on Dash lips, her cheeks, her forehead, her nose, her neck, her ears, an inescapable whirlwind of moist, warm kisses.
"On Dash lips" should probably be "On Dash's lips".
“Oh, I’m sorry,” Fluttershy said. “We didn’t mean to pry. Um, or we did, but we didn’t mean it in a bad why, I think. I’m sorry.”
The context suggests that "in a bad why" should be "in a bad way".
I’ve read studies, and it’s been indisputably proven that all mares masturbate by the time they’ve reached out age. It’s science!”
That heart monitor must be goin' all SORTS of crazy here!
If i had anything to say about this chapter, anyway i could accurately describes my feelings towards this piece of writing, anything at all. it would be..... Yes
"On Dash lips" should probably be "On Dash's lips".
The context suggests that "in a bad why" should be "in a bad way".
"Out age" should probably be "our age".
This went from a deep, feel-y story to 50 Shades of Hay in a very shirt amount of time.
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Waaaaaat? And it was doing so well.
YES! TWILIGHT GETS LONGEST KISS OUT OF ALL OF THEM! TWIDASH!
Ahem, sorry about that.
Actually thought a nurse or doctor would walk in. That would have been hilarious.