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this story is pretty damn awesome, it captures the characters decently. I faved last chapter tentatively, but this just scored a story long reader.
EDIT: i can't wait till this gets a few more chapters so re-reading this becomes much more awesome. DFTBA
Didn't see anything in the way of mistakes myself.
Can't wait to see where this story goes...
This is good. It just needs quicker updates. That'd be amazing :D
The really funny part?
The sentence in which you state your efforts to find an editor were fruitless had more mistakes in it than the chapter, at least, as far as I could tell.
Another brilliant chapter Im even more excited to see this progress.
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I believe that's the joke.
4451003 Which would be why I said it was funny. Whether it was intentional or unintentional.
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Well, I've been looking for editors but I've just come up empty.
I've tried posting of forums, and even PMing a few, but I guess none of them want to read Chimera.
If I'm missing something obvious, then by all means point it out, otherwise I'm afraid commenters, like yourself, are the closest thing I have to an editor.
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I can't really promise anything, especially with the fact that I don't think I know english well enough to be a decent editor - alongside the fact that I haven't even read Xenophilia itself and basically clicked on the link to this story by mistake - but I'll try to look through the other chapters this weekend if I have time.
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Hey, buddy, every little bit helps and is appreciated.
You say you found my story by mistake? Well hopefully it turns out to be a happy accident.
As for Xenophilia itself, I whole heartedly recommend reading it. The story itself is a little cheesy in my opinion, but the world building is really something amazing.
Hope to hear from you again soon.
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Thanks, I don't know how I missed some of these.
Very nice of Celestia to personally cast a healing spell on this woman.
Shame that we don't get to see Miss "Longshanks" wake up yet. Maybe next chapter, hopefully.
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Thanks, I figured I'd add a little more detail to something that's usually glossed over in the xenoverse. Also, don't worry, she won't spend the whole story asleep.
I read the original, but I can't remember why Lero was scared of celestia in the first place
8128782 they never elaborated, other than to say that it was related to 'how he got there', basically because of PTSD suppressing his memories. Some fans, (including me,) believe that the fair folk captured him and that he escaped through the wyld, which is basically a magic interdimentional hedge maze.