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Oh boy... I really hope this ends well.
There must be a cure!
Good job on your story.Except
for the spelling of some words in this chapter, and others.
Here's one mistake: dose
This means a dose, or dosage, it does not mean does. (I may go on a Twilight Sparkle-style rampage if you don't fix these ^_^)
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To the author yeah you used multiple instances of dose instead of does in this fic. Other than that Great story
Never use "y'all" when talking to just one person.
4898825 yep, what he said.
So... is she in danger of hulking out when she gets angry?
I can't wait for her introduction to Equestria gets into full swing.
It's always so much fun and shenanigans when a new face is dropped into Ponyville.
Great chapter We finally have a name woop
Red vs Blue reference?
I like Rebecca already. Tough and aggressive from the word 'go,' what a contrast to Lero! But yeah, she'll definitely need friends here.
I also enjoy all that backstory about the Earth pony alchemists, the unicorn wizards, and the pegasus weather shapers. Very lucky that Celestia came along to be the paragon of all goodness!
Regretfully, though, I have to make a grammar correction as well.
In this case, it should be 'You're in the hospital.' As in 'You are in the hospital.'
Y-O-U-R is possessive.
"Your house." ≠ You're house. (You are house.)
"You're in a spaceship, Ecnalab." ≠ Your in a spaceship, Ecnalab. (This 'in a spaceship' belongs to you, Ecnalab.)
Thanks, everybody, for the feedback. Yes, I'm aware that my spelling is not the best, and I actually do read my chapters several times before posting them, but I guess I just don't have a very keen eye for mistakes. So, if you find any mistakes please don't hesitate to point them out, and I'll work on getting them fixed.
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Excellent! Don't worry, you're learning, and we wouldn't bother correcting it if we didn't love the story and want to be more absorbed into it.
And speaking of which, one more thing:
In this case, it would be Earth with a capital E, since this is Earth the planet we're discussing as opposed to a small plot of earth on a farmer's plantation.