When Rainbow Dash discovers she's a lesbian, she's afraid to tell her friends; especially her crush, Fluttershy. Rainbow goes through a lot of trouble to keep her love a secret, only to find out Fluttershy has a secret of her own.
"Fluttershy may even suffer from brain death, which is an even more severe situation. At this rate, her brain cells wouldn't have regenerated at all but instead perish the remaining ones." "Well, when will she wake up?"
Is that made up? Or a real term?
Also Fluttershy was really out of character during this chapter. And why did you give Soarin Snips and Snails Syndrome?
I do realize Fluttershy was very out of character for this chapter but I decided, everyone has a darker side. Even though she wasn't 'dark' I just thought that Fluttershy isn't what she seems. Kinda like a "Holy mother of God," giggle scene. I've always wanted to see her do crazy stuff like this; be the opposite of shy. I felt like Fluttershy should have a defense quality after the episode with Iron Will when she asserts herself.
Let me explain further... Soarin thought fluttershy had made Dash cry when she didn't, it was that one stallion who said that Dashs parents might be dead. Even after both fultters and dash told soarin it wasn't fluttershys fault, he still blames her.
And no, I know some people/ponies are protective of those they care for but what about understanding ant trust.
4036451 Oooooohhhh!! :D Ok, sense mode in gear. Soarin' was just so obsessed about caring for Rainbow Dash he didn't really care at all what they said. (Stupid Soarin') I'm debating whether or not to make chapter 9 the last chapter. Hmm.... Ugh.
"Fluttershy may even suffer from brain death, which is an even more severe situation. At this rate, her brain cells wouldn't have regenerated at all but instead perish the remaining ones." "Well, when will she wake up?"
Is that made up? Or a real term?
Also Fluttershy was really out of character during this chapter. And why did you give Soarin Snips and Snails Syndrome?
CALLED IT!
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No, it is an actual term.
I do realize Fluttershy was very out of character for this chapter but I decided, everyone has a darker side. Even though she wasn't 'dark' I just thought that Fluttershy isn't what she seems. Kinda like a "Holy mother of God," giggle scene. I've always wanted to see her do crazy stuff like this; be the opposite of shy. I felt like Fluttershy should have a defense quality after the episode with Iron Will when she asserts herself.
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But, when did Soarin' have a snips and snails moment? He tricked Fluttershy to get...
REVENGE. Heh.
You made him stupid and deaf to get a fight scene, therefore, Snips and Snails Syndrome!
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.-.
I'm sorry, but I'm extremely lost. I'm slow sometimes.
He didn't know Fluttershy was going to beat him senseless.
Let me explain further... Soarin thought fluttershy had made Dash cry when she didn't, it was that one stallion who said that Dashs parents might be dead. Even after both fultters and dash told soarin it wasn't fluttershys fault, he still blames her.
And no, I know some people/ponies are protective of those they care for but what about understanding ant trust.
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Oooooohhhh!! :D Ok, sense mode in gear. Soarin' was just so obsessed about caring for Rainbow Dash he didn't really care at all what they said.
(Stupid Soarin')
I'm debating whether or not to make chapter 9 the last chapter. Hmm.... Ugh.
Are rainbows parents alive or not? You never made it clear.
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Shh... it's in Chapter 9(which I'm typing on my crappy kindle right now).
OMG that's what I'm using too!
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xD
Crappy kindle twins.
/)*(\
Wait.... you can write story's from your kindle? Then I need to get started on my own!
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Haha! Of course you can. It's a bit frustrating, just to warn you.
I understand, I get frustrated writing comments.
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Lol
Well, here I go to start the first chapter!
That reminds me of the scene where Twilight saw Fluttershy suplexing that bear.
shoopdawoop11 yeah but the bear thing was a massage, I don't think she was massaging Soarin here.
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Oh I love flutterdash all because of this you should be proud