This was a really nice chapter. I liked that Scootaloo forgave Apple Bloom.
You did a great job showing just how much better Scootaloo was getting by simply changing her surroundings. I'm also glad that you're taking the romance, as per the tag I know the two will at least discuss it, slowly. Scootaloo isn't even certain as to how Sweetie Belle meant what she said, and she doesn't want to take any chances right now.
I would say that the swearing was jarring, and to an extent it was, but that is simply how people speak. At that age, I spoke like a sailor too, so I've acclimated to it within this story. I only say that because some, myself included at times, can find profanity a bit off-putting.
Having Scootaloot's father know that she was the one that had him arrested was just perfect, especially since he basically just dug his own grave. Her reaction was also well described as she still held a very real and justifiable fear of him.
I looks like things will become brighter for Scootaloo, but she still has a few hurdles to overcome. The two bullies, her emancipation from her parents, and, ultimately, discovering if there can be anything between her and Sweetie Belle.
I'm really glad I found your story, and I look forward to reading more.
A adore this story. Thanks for sharing it! I've noticed a few auto correct typos but nothing too bad. It's heartfelt without being too melodramatic. I remember how raw being a teenager felt. :)
4507996 First, there's reason why the romance is being taken slow. Though, don't ask because no spoilers. Also, the emancipation isn't really covered in this story. The main story ends before the summer and I think that it would be until the summer that the court hearings and such would start.
4531413 You clearly have a plan, and given how well, and touching, the story is progressing, I have a feeling it's a good one.
Ask for no spoilers? Got it.
Not having the emancipation be part of the main story is an interesting choice. It shows that life is moving one its usual pace, though it could another story for another day. Not a question, I promise.
Lastly, I would like to apologize. I reread my comment, and wow was I a jerk. I killed the second have of the first paragraph. It was stupid and had nothing to do with the story, so for that, and any rudeness I might have done, I'm sorry.
4531505 Quite honestly, the one thing that fanfiction (and ultimately the internet) has taught is to know when to say, "I don't give a fuck." So I didn't even really get offended.
4531543 That's good to hear. Being able to shrug meaningless things off and move on is a really useful skill, especially, like you said, in an environment like the internet.
YEY! scoota-life is improving!
As someone with a bottle of antidepressants on his bathroom counter, I need a happy-ish story like this.
This was a really nice chapter. I liked that Scootaloo forgave Apple Bloom.
You did a great job showing just how much better Scootaloo was getting by simply changing her surroundings. I'm also glad that you're taking the romance, as per the tag I know the two will at least discuss it, slowly. Scootaloo isn't even certain as to how Sweetie Belle meant what she said, and she doesn't want to take any chances right now.
I would say that the swearing was jarring, and to an extent it was, but that is simply how people speak. At that age, I spoke like a sailor too, so I've acclimated to it within this story. I only say that because some, myself included at times, can find profanity a bit off-putting.
Having Scootaloot's father know that she was the one that had him arrested was just perfect, especially since he basically just dug his own grave. Her reaction was also well described as she still held a very real and justifiable fear of him.
I looks like things will become brighter for Scootaloo, but she still has a few hurdles to overcome. The two bullies, her emancipation from her parents, and, ultimately, discovering if there can be anything between her and Sweetie Belle.
I'm really glad I found your story, and I look forward to reading more.
A adore this story. Thanks for sharing it! I've noticed a few auto correct typos but nothing too bad. It's heartfelt without being too melodramatic. I remember how raw being a teenager felt. :)
4507996
First, there's reason why the romance is being taken slow. Though, don't ask because no spoilers. Also, the emancipation isn't really covered in this story. The main story ends before the summer and I think that it would be until the summer that the court hearings and such would start.
4531413 You clearly have a plan, and given how well, and touching, the story is progressing, I have a feeling it's a good one.
Ask for no spoilers? Got it.
Not having the emancipation be part of the main story is an interesting choice. It shows that life is moving one its usual pace, though it could another story for another day. Not a question, I promise.
Lastly, I would like to apologize. I reread my comment, and wow was I a jerk. I killed the second have of the first paragraph. It was stupid and had nothing to do with the story, so for that, and any rudeness I might have done, I'm sorry.
I look forward to reading your next chapter.
4531505
Quite honestly, the one thing that fanfiction (and ultimately the internet) has taught is to know when to say, "I don't give a fuck." So I didn't even really get offended.
4531543 That's good to hear. Being able to shrug meaningless things off and move on is a really useful skill, especially, like you said, in an environment like the internet.
so beutiful...made me shed a tear...
Kind of curious is there any truth to that. I personally had Ken and rainbow Dash as a lesbian but some people have different head cannons so.