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Casa De La Boom... Tina... oh Buck, I know this girl...
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You do do you?
5081420 Oh yes, I do. Not complaining, just saying I see a lot of explosives in Phantoms future.
was that a borderlands 2 refference
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Gas bombs that cause melting? That sounds like Thief 2.
Sentient- able to perceive or feel things, something that all most animals can do.
Sapient- Wise or attempting to be wise, also may refer to Sapience; the ability of an organism or entity to act with judgement.
Other than that nitpick good story so far and I hope the housemates end up being side characters.
5112945 thanks, I truthfully didn't know the exact differance
Do you know exactly where I used sentient instead of sapient so I can fix it?
5112967 I would show you but I'm on my phone right now using data, otherwise I don't have internet. So I have no idea how to do it. One instance is in this chapter when they meet madame Armando when she asked if Trist was talking with Phantom.
Prologue during breakfast with Trist after Goerge's short appearance (what happened to him anyway?)
Chapter 3 when the tribe gryphons appear
Chapter 4 when the tribe gryphons catch Trist
5113198 thanks
And about George . . . No comment.
EEERRRRGGG!! It's not Lead (Pb), It's Graphite (Carbon/white clay mix) It's only called Lead because the ancient Greeks generally used a lead stylus to write in wax tablets. Lead was known to have adverse health effects by the time pencils came into use. Besides, Lead doesn't leave as dark a mark and is much more difficult to erase than Graphite....
Sorry, it's just a peeve for me.
<Nagging voice> "You'll get Lead poisoning if you chew on that pencil"
<Me> "No, if you get Lead poisoning, it'll be from the paint."
What? Is Armani a unicorn or a pegasus? You said unicorn a minute ago, but this referrers Armani as having wings.... Or is she an alicorn? I'm going to assume not.
AHHHH PHANTOM WE DONT USE LEAD FOR PENCILES!!! ARE YOU CRAZY?! DOCTOR dont you dare try that. I suggest using graphite instead of lead. I'll be upset if he ends up trying to make penciles with real lead and then dies of lead poisoning.
Borderlands 2 tiny Tina reference...awesome but let me say this, don't pies her off. If you do run.