Sweetie Belle finds herself learning about fun things that fillies can do with their bodies. The only real hitch is that the body driving her through this latest experiment is Rarity's.
this gets steadily better as it goes on, u r very good at writing strong, raw emotion into ur narrative and dialogue. its mushy yes, but exactly as much as it should be, at least when coming from the perspective of a sweet, fresh and innocent filly like sweetie belle. keep going, u r now at the point where i upvote u!
this gets steadily better as it goes on, u r very good at writing strong, raw emotion into ur narrative and dialogue. its mushy yes, but exactly as much as it should be, at least when coming from the perspective of a sweet, fresh and innocent filly like sweetie belle. keep going, u r now at the point where i upvote u!
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Thanks. It is my first fic that wasn't greentext style on 4chan, so I am fairly new to it. I'll keep trying to improve.
Can't wait for the update
Try not to feel under pressure.
This is a really great story and you're doing well!
3910781 I find it funny that you typed that in perfect Grammer except for you, you're and are.
4056109 THIS HAS GOT TO BE THE FUNNIEST YOUTUBE VIDEO OF ALL TIME, OMG CAN'T STOP LAUGHING
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[gets good at 51 seconds].
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Those are the funniest.
This chapter was WAAY better than the first two.
Just keep it going like this.