A Captain of the United Gilbret Federation is stuck in world where is Ponies are the master and humans are nothing but savage and tamed animals. Well not if this Captain has something to say about it.
"I want to assembly to grant me and the FRINGE diversion to attack this alien race with a strike force and once we have set up a Base we can declare Marshall law in the area and punished this alien race for what crime they have done against humanity."
"I want the assembly to grant me and the FRINGE division to attack this alien race with a strike force. Once we have set up a Base we can declare Marshall law in the area and punish this alien race for what crimes they have done against humanity."
second one is slightly better. do you have an editor? also Damn son that grammer.
Edit: "I knew this day would." you mean "I knew this day would come." ?
Edit: there's too many spelling errors here, sorry I wanted to give this fic a chance and that chance is gone. 4 months and almost 1k words riddled with more spelling and grammar errors than I can readily count.
I love how this rouge faction is complaining about how the current government is not "free", and send mercs to help a nation that has slavery.
Or so you think.
"I want to assembly to grant me and the FRINGE diversion to attack this alien race with a strike force and once we have set up a Base we can declare Marshall law in the area and punished this alien race for what crime they have done against humanity."
"I want the assembly to grant me and the FRINGE division to attack this alien race with a strike force. Once we have set up a Base we can declare Marshall law in the area and punish this alien race for what crimes they have done against humanity."
second one is slightly better. do you have an editor? also Damn son that grammer.
Edit: "I knew this day would."
you mean "I knew this day would come." ?
Edit: there's too many spelling errors here, sorry I wanted to give this fic a chance and that chance is gone. 4 months and almost 1k words riddled with more spelling and grammar errors than I can readily count.
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I think my editor died. He hasn't respond to any email I sent him and I have not heard of him in months.
To be honest English is my third lauaguage so certain things I still learning.
I'll change the things that you said. Ok
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Also I wrote this on my iPad while in a crowded train so.....
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5128725 s'all g. Thought it might be written in a format that didn't have a conventional keyboard. Also, good on you for knowing three languages.
Oh, they done fucked up now
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MORE!!! I must see the ponies demise!!!!
meh i'm done with all the destruction
And so, the JSDF fought
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