luke comes to equestria

by Prince Luna

luke goes back and comes back part 2/2; the chrono core X

BUT HE WAS AN HUMAN!

luke looked around and saw everypony staring at him

"who are you!" asked lyra, who cos she fancied luke but as a pony not an human

"its me luke" said luke who really was luke

but nopony beleved him :( and the equestria police arrested him

"you need a audience with the princes" they said

"k" luke cryed

he saw her but she new it was him!

"luke" she said

"hello" he replied

"we need to change you to a alicorn again we need to find the chrono core X" her voice boomed

"what why" luke asked

"it is the ultimat power and there is a new bad guy who turned you back to a person" she expl-eksp-said.

"k where is it" luke said

"i dunno i used it years ago but its lost" she said

"k do i need to go on a journey!" luke beemed.

"yes" celestia said

***

luke got the main characters of mlpfim and remembered s1e2 where they adventured but he knowed thy needed to go far so they went to the dessert

"whats a human again!" asked rarity

"its like a pony but different in lots of ways" luke expl-ekspl- i really dont like that word :(

"howdy do ya'll no where the chrono core x is yeehaw" applejack asked, she was a texan.

"no" said luke

"then where are we going!" luna, lukes wife, asked

"wherever our feet and whoves take us" luke said

"k" everypony said (howdy k yeehaw applejack said, she was a texan.)

suddenly spike BURRRRRRRPED a nd there was an scroll

"its from the princes it says that luke you are the chrono core x!" he read

"then whos the villain"

"YOU TWOO!"

luke fell over "oh no"

find out what happens in the VERY LAST EVER CHAPTER next! will luke kill himself or live to doom equestria 4ever!

editers not: there will be a very special difrance to the next chapter i bet 0 people will guess what it is!

Comments

[Pengwertle]

First!

And also, this is the best story ever. I was laughing by the third line.

EDIT: Ok, I read it, and THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRR!!!!

And also next chapter is the last one? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!

[Pengwertle]

O hey, I found a perfect website to express my feelings about this story ending: D:

[Prince Luna]

374571 is k dude th finale will be gud!!! :) :) :) :) :)

[Khorne]

ogm
wil luk mak it

[Prince Luna]

374832 dunno

[Pengwertle]

374943 Will it be more than 300 words? Plz?

[Prince Luna]

378580 w8 n c!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Pengwertle]

378582 MKAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!