Watch the dramatic reading of the first 3 chapters here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0g0VUDibfss it's hillarious XD
luke comes to equertia and he is the most powerfulest alikorn ever so he uses his magic and does good things 4 the place but he leaves momentarily and chaos happens he needs to CTRL+S the day. (Not to be taken seriously AT ALL. Any bad spelling or grammar is intentional. A spoof of poorly made self-inserts. For now this is a one-shot I did when I was bored. There may or may not be another part, I just want to do my crossovers now.)
Chapters (6)
leik if u cryed :(:(:(
LIKE!
ALSO! SUCK IT LOBSTER!
The description alone made me cry with its terrible grammer. You win.
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Fuck
Skyrim songs. Y u so distracting.
I surrender, this is to distracting from my other
Distractions.
Cheers
~iraqlobstah
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Let's call it quits before we have to taste the might of the banhammer
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DA
Cheers
~iraqlobstah
What the fuck.
A poorly-made self-insert to make fun of the fact that this is a poorly-made self-insert.
I didn't laugh. Did it hurt to type this story, sir?
Luke is such a likeable character. I hope he gets added to season 3.
Made me laugh a bit. If this is what a poor self-insertion looks like, mine must be merely mediocre.
...And that's how rounded every self-inert fiction is.
10/10
Thiis had bean dun be4.
Please go back to the moon Luna.
Where this story belongs.
Cheers
~iraqlobstah
"~~~THE END~~~ :-)" was my favorite line, you just can't get emotion like that anywhere else. Yes, I did cry.
10/10 best stori
luke wuz da main homie if u no wat i meen
Fuck that was deep. Well done man. I cried.
Was that supposed to make me feel something?
This is brilliant beyond belief. I know you probably had to soak your keyboard in bleech after you wrote this. And I facepalmed hard enough to bloody my nose. But I love it how you pointed out how, with most self inserts, the mane charector is the center and love of everypony. You had me hopping up and down in my chair in laughter. But I dare not go back to writing my own story for a while for fear of this story rubbing off on my writing. But you sir, have made my day!
"hello! oh a alicorn we need to take you to princes celestia" twilight sparkle demanded!
"Potassium" said luke who smiled.
Read it again, replacing incorrect spellings with their respective scientific/mathematical names
i = Iodine
u = Uranium
o = Oxygen
k = Potassium
cos = Cosine
y = Yttrium
luna = Lu Na = Lutetium Sodium
celestia = Ce L Es Ti a = Cerium L Einsteinium Titanium A
&%$* = Ampersand Percentage Dollar Asterisks
Made me laugh... Also I reckon you should make Discord speak normally... Cosine can.
"Or not!"
Quillo out...
10/10
I cried because Luke killed everypony's dreams when he picked Luna instead of them.
>"im luke" said luke whos name was luke.
Just one of the many gems in this story. Being a mock-fic, i was skeptical at first, but this thing is bucking hilarious.
Well done good sir!
After reading this, I was granted to ability to awesome allso baad spillign und greemmer
oh god my head hurts so much after reading this.
It was either because of the deep message of love and loyalty in this story or it was because the grammar fried my brain.
either way I still got a good laugh and also cried as the migraine set in so you win.
k ty evrey1 i might right a sequal now??!!
so, lemme get this straight...
Luna's the texan, right?
yeehaw
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I thought it was celestia.
den luk had litl babbies
Meh. I've read worse.
This is pure genius. I applaud you. :D
Moar plz
First!
And also, this is the best story ever. I was laughing by the third line.
EDIT: Ok, I read it, and THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRR!!!!
And also next chapter is the last one?
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
O hey, I found a perfect website to express my feelings about this story ending: D:
374571 is k dude th finale will be gud!!! :) :) :) :) :)
ogm
wil luk mak it
374832 dunno
374943 Will it be more than 300 words? Plz?
378580 w8 n c!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
378582 MKAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I wish I 'wos a nuke'.
393224 sam :/
I hate you. :P
EDIT: I didn't see the April Fool's part. I feel stupid now.
399090 dat so mean :'( :'(
o wait lol i new u were jokes!
sentient nukes, story just got even deeper than i could have ever imagined.
seriously, u shud do a sekwel were luke got pony pregant and he has an air who will rejuvin--restor--reconditi--fix Equestira from kayos
403289 dud it wernt last chapter GRAND FINALE STILL COMIN SOON!
First! and also YAAAY UPDATE!!!!!
EDIT: This was brilliant. But I'm sad you started making the narrative grammatically correct
616449 it's k there's a raisin for dat
617067 What is the raisin?!
617086 no shhhh its a spoiler find out next chapter!
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"cool!" luke exclai- exlame- said.
LOL