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.......... yeaaaah that is not gonna end well for them. like at all. probably gonna take a while but murder seems to be something that is impossible to trul get away with in equestria. one way or another, this is gonna bite them in the plots.
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4562774 you are misinterpreting what i meant. this has potential for story. killing her was a mistake period. yet a mistake that has potential for a plot. not to mention she was not exactly someone of importance enough to gain the immediate attention of the ruling demigods.
also it makes more sense than what you had before with berry turning outright homicidal maniac. here she was acting out of anger.
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(note before reading this is written on a phone, so mistakes will happen in the writing that I don't catch)
"Killing her was a mistake period" is what you said.
"a mistake period"
"mistake period"
"MISTAKE PERIOD"
Listen I'm happy that your reading it and all, happy to have a person reading the stuff I write. But you need to stop talking about this. ESPECIALLY with the whole mistake shit.
Berry has just committed murder, and Colgate of course stands in accomplice to murder. What happens to them next is even a mystery to me, tho mostly everything in this has been pre-thought. It is subject to change upon what Colgate thinks is entertaining.
I don't know if she will be punished for her crime or not. We will both have to find out.