My human and me

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3841221 Indeed

Why does this have so many downvotes and not as many upvotes. This is actually pretty good.

3841323 It's called the human Section, everything gets downvoted here, unless its a clopfic.

You ponies are about to meet a very power adversary!

I'm not understanding the downvotes.

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Have all of my yes, dear comrade. dl.dropbox.com/u/21167245/FiMFiction/Emoticons/misc_Spit_rape.png

It's good, aside from a few tense errors. Continue.

In need of proofreaders/editors?

3844005 Sure. Mind pointing the things I need to change?

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Two possible reasons: It's a Communist soldier, or, why I usually stay away from these stories, the slavery of humans.

3844306 Communism don't count for shit when you're being led around on a leash.

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True, but those are the reasons I guess why others might downvote. I choose not to downvote unless a story misleads me or is just disgustingly garbage.

The "Your Human and You" universe is a bit disturbing to me, after all ponies are keeping a group of animals for sex and pleasure, while also work. Its fascinating idea but the fact that ponies use humans for sex and enjoyment really puts me off, in what type of society would a being or a group think of such a thing? It just feels a bit messed up. Anyhow, the story is turning out great so far!

Well Paul here is royally fucked for the time being.

3845588 It's Pavel, it's just in English it translates to Paul. I tried to find if there was a way to spell Pavel in Cyrillic and it come out in English as Pavel, but apparently there isn't.

3845645 I know, but Pavel reminds me of someone I don't particularly like...

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So copy/paste the story into ms word, run a 'find and replace' on the characters name, make it whatever you want. Then read the story. Problem solved.

Thanks for all the likes guys! Second chapter is in progress.

3847681 Just a question, this.... story won't have too serious shit right?

Wow, the first thing he does in Equestria is to waste Gilda?.......i don't know how to react to that.
Some fans will go yay! and other Boo!!!...............Is it wierd that i was kinda hoping that Gilda would atleast have manegd to do the Whoopie with him Before he escaped?

3850402 What do you mean?

3850743 There's a reason for it.

3850796 As in, abuse, torment, ect.

3850833 Nah, I might mention it though

3845651 Let me guess, Last Light?

3851063 yep

3851068 I knew it! I knew this, I just didn't comment it for some reason. Anyway, wanna take a guess why I named the main character Pavel?

3851088 So we'd hate him?

3851092 No, because I found Pavel to be a Russian name that I hadn't ever seen used in a fic. It had no relation to Last Light whatsoever

You're six-shot revolver has a seventh, magical, bullet :P

Other than that, interesting, I'll wait for the next chapter to see if I fav or not.

3851825 Nagant 1895 is a seven round cylinder revolver.

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I am sorry, my google-fu is weak.

Story looks great so far. well im not a fan of human slavery but atleast we are getting a soviet sajuz soldier then tipical american idiot witch is nice for a change
About the pe3 aka pieska. IRL it could carry 4x 250 kg or 2x500 kg or 2x250 kg and 4x100 kg bombs or 8 x 132mm rockets. And Pe-3 is not a heavy attacker or ground attck airplane is dive bomber. it had great diving capabilities and could easily maintain hight speed in a dive. i dunno aboutt what variant of pe3 we are tlking about but it usually had a rear gunner bellow the tail.
+1 for comrade Stalin twitching left arm joke. didnt seen it used before.
continue great work comrade and slava sovietsky sajuz

Wow, what an interesting start! I'm a bit confused why Pavel would pick up Viktor's body and carry it for such a long distance. Isn't picking up a body in any manner extremely taxing and would cause extreme hydration to set in faster? Maybe the body could have been used as a shield from the sun? Yet, that would have taken even more energy. Meh, whatever. I love the story so far and I hope Gilda's plays a part.

3856412 I know I didn't explain this much, but he and Viktor were good friends. I'll have to flesh that out more later, but that's why I had him carry the body.

3857086 good shit do more

3875833 Next chapter should be done by tomorrow or Sunday.

3852224 by the beard of kalen, that's ... Hmmm... Not that long, actually

Looking pretty good so far, I hope it stays that way.