3782160 I didn't like all the torture and sadistic pain in tarnished silver. So this is a very watered down version that's more to my liking. I've always seen rarity as a dominatrix type, just not to the extent tarnished silver took it.
This chapter was even HOTTER then the first! i like, sooooooo wana be in Spike's skin right about now!
anychance for Silver Spoon to join the fun as maybe an apprentice mistress to Rarity? Still a slave but to miss Rarity alone. she would have authority over Spike, Pip, and Featherweight.
just a suggestion.
since she probably isn't their now, she could come over to the boutique, after school, to train with her mistress. maybe because Diamond is a submissive in private and Silver wants to please her own slave pet!
3782336 Silver Spoon (like Tarnished Silver) should have the honor of referring to her as "Miss Rarity" and not mistress to set her apart as the alfa slave.
I'll leave it to you how emotionally invested in Silver Spoon you want Rarity to be. But a cruel thing it would be to have Spike tied up and forced to watch Silver and Rarity make sweet passionate love as equals in Rarity's bed.
ServingSpoon (editor/publisher): I am in the midst of editing the spacing and tabs. you can delete this message "baby-girl" but i thought you and the readers needed to know i am still working on it.
It will take a while to space and tab properly sense the format did not transfer.
Wow nice hot femdom/petplay story with one of my favorite pairs cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-rcomfortkiss.png though the 'feelings from for a colt' part puts a worry in my sparity feels upvoted and a read later for more Also suggestions/tips are rattling in my too-afraid-to-write-story-and-post-himself-brain if you're interested
Wow...this is getting pretty weird now.
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you clicked on a story called "sissy spike" and a chapter called "spike's first dress"....weirdness was to be expected =P
technically sound but not my cup of tea have an upvote anyway
if I didn't have a passionate hatred for the concept, I'd say it was an alright story
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I like it...dont really care much for the gay sex but I still like it!
I'm looking forward to reading this, even though the only gay (male) ship I ever did was Sweepy Belle X Silver Ladle in the Cutimark Cavaliers blog.
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I didn't like all the torture and sadistic pain in tarnished silver. So this is a very watered down version that's more to my liking. I've always seen rarity as a dominatrix type, just not to the extent tarnished silver took it.
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I agree.. your story did what his didn't do much of.. it aroused me!
This chapter was even HOTTER then the first! i like, sooooooo wana be in Spike's skin right about now!
anychance for Silver Spoon to join the fun as maybe an apprentice mistress to Rarity? Still a slave but to miss Rarity alone. she would have authority over Spike, Pip, and Featherweight.
just a suggestion.
since she probably isn't their now, she could come over to the boutique, after school, to train with her mistress. maybe because Diamond is a submissive in private and Silver wants to please her own slave pet!
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mom...you just gave me the idea for a new chapter.
or if not a whole chapter, an addition to chapter 4
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SQUEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!
Bueno
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oi...momma, i appreciate all these spell checks and edits you're doing for me, but my laptop is way too slow to make all these changes
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Silver Spoon (like Tarnished Silver) should have the honor of referring to her as "Miss Rarity" and not mistress to set her apart as the alfa slave.
I'll leave it to you how emotionally invested in Silver Spoon you want Rarity to be. But a cruel thing it would be to have Spike tied up and forced to watch Silver and Rarity make sweet passionate love as equals in Rarity's bed.
i am such a baaad.. dirty little mud pony!
ServingSpoon (editor/publisher): I am in the midst of editing the spacing and tabs. you can delete this message "baby-girl" but i thought you and the readers needed to know i am still working on it.
It will take a while to space and tab properly sense the format did not transfer.
please bare with me every pony
ServingSpoon: Okay sorry I got side tracked. back to editing right after I nuke my burrito a third time, and actually eat it.
ServingSpoon: YES I have successfully revised the chapters for you and both are now well over 1000 words!
signing off now. Glad to have been a part of this and look forward to editing more stories for my "baby-girl"
Hope you all enjoy reading as much as I did editing. Diamond Tiara like, eat your heart out, honey.
Sincerely, Silver "Serving" Spoon Editor and Publisher.
favorited but down voted
lol....
really looking forward to where this story will go
Wow nice hot femdom/petplay story with one of my favorite pairs cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-rcomfortkiss.png
though the 'feelings from for a colt' part puts a worry in my sparity feels
upvoted and a read later for more
Also suggestions/tips are rattling in my too-afraid-to-write-story-and-post-himself-brain if you're interested
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PM them to me and I'll see what I think.
I'm sorry for such a long wait for chapter three...writer's block sucks >.<
Continue pwease.
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I will, I will, but chapter three is tricky to write...