... This was really hot, should I be a little ashamed to admit that? Nah! Here's an idea if you taking them, because apparently my shame knows no bounds, Octavia when she is playing for a garden party and needs to hold it in until she's done playing. Or if she's in a large orchestra, at the back hidden behind others and her cello, and wets herself. Maybe out of nerves or something? Or maybe do the same with Vinyl Scratch, but you know with her in a club, not and orchestra. Just saying, could be hot. Oh, yey I found my shame!
3885543 I wouldn't expect a Vinyl Scratch chapter, because as long as you accept it's not anthro, that's the first chapter of Er...Scratch That you're describing. Octavia would also be unlikely, because while it's not nearly as in-depth as a chapter would be here, and it's not the same situation, I did still write about her in that story. Actually, considering the differences, Octavia could be a possibility.
3886283 Well that's me told. Well how about a Celestia or Luna chapter, they can be stuck in a meeting and it goes on a little longer than they though?
3887046 stream1.gifsoup.com/view/143332/nc-genius-o.gif Well, except for one thing: your boolean operator. "Celestia or Luna". Very obviously, it should be "Celestia and Luna". And when we take that it into account, it's so good that it's starting to take mental precedence over the Coco chapter.
3895084 Well, not quite. As the description says, Celestia and Luna are next. There's no point in saving a character for "last", as this is a story that can't have a dedicated end. Unless I turn this into an epic, with some evil villain causing every problem, and requiring a climatic showdown...nah.
Rainbow Dash was initially discarded for the same reason Applejack was, being that neither of them have shame. I had a hard time imagining a realistic scenario where either of them would really care about just going. Though now, Rainbow...Wonderbolts Academy...with Lightning Dust...that's something I can work with.
3895906 Hm, the showdown sounds interesting, but considering that takes probably a lot of time to do, I wouldn't put any hope in seeing it being done, but that's still okay. Can't wait for the next chapterrr! Also, as for Applejack... Being obsessed with all the work she needed to do for the Apple Family Reunion, maybe she forgot to use the bathroom, leading to the circumstances. Just a suggestion, ya' know?
Good chapter, I prefer the ones where they wet themselves all the way, like this one. Although, while panties are fine, I'd have liked it better if her shorts had stayed up, and hope you do something like that with Rainbow Dash if you ever find a way to make it work with her.
Coco train, wooo!
Omg yes very good chapter kinky to ;)
... This was really hot, should I be a little ashamed to admit that? Nah! Here's an idea if you taking them, because apparently my shame knows no bounds, Octavia when she is playing for a garden party and needs to hold it in until she's done playing. Or if she's in a large orchestra, at the back hidden behind others and her cello, and wets herself. Maybe out of nerves or something? Or maybe do the same with Vinyl Scratch, but you know with her in a club, not and orchestra. Just saying, could be hot. Oh, yey I found my shame!
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I wouldn't expect a Vinyl Scratch chapter, because as long as you accept it's not anthro, that's the first chapter of Er...Scratch That you're describing. Octavia would also be unlikely, because while it's not nearly as in-depth as a chapter would be here, and it's not the same situation, I did still write about her in that story. Actually, considering the differences, Octavia could be a possibility.
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Well that's me told. Well how about a Celestia or Luna chapter, they can be stuck in a meeting and it goes on a little longer than they though?
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stream1.gifsoup.com/view/143332/nc-genius-o.gif
Well, except for one thing: your boolean operator. "Celestia or Luna". Very obviously, it should be "Celestia and Luna". And when we take that it into account, it's so good that it's starting to take mental precedence over the Coco chapter.
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Bammit! Why didn't I think of that..? Wait, I did... I was just a typo...
Next should be Dashie ... >:D
I'm guessing the princess(es) will be last. Damn it. I'll have to keep an eye on this story.
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Well, not quite. As the description says, Celestia and Luna are next. There's no point in saving a character for "last", as this is a story that can't have a dedicated end. Unless I turn this into an epic, with some evil villain causing every problem, and requiring a climatic showdown...nah.
Rainbow Dash was initially discarded for the same reason Applejack was, being that neither of them have shame. I had a hard time imagining a realistic scenario where either of them would really care about just going. Though now, Rainbow...Wonderbolts Academy...with Lightning Dust...that's something I can work with.
Had you ever thought in including the Cutie Mark Crusaders in this story?Just asking.
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I wouldn't have anything against doing it, my standards are very low. It's just going to be a while.
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Hm, the showdown sounds interesting, but considering that takes probably a lot of time to do, I wouldn't put any hope in seeing it being done, but that's still okay. Can't wait for the next chapterrr!
Also, as for Applejack...
Being obsessed with all the work she needed to do for the Apple Family Reunion, maybe she forgot to use the bathroom, leading to the circumstances. Just a suggestion, ya' know?
WAHT A SHIT TASTIK STOREE
love you Captain
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You shitpost
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aww no shit!
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Technically Dashie Has shame. Lots of shame. She never wants to admit anything, right?
And for the Coco and Rarity part you could try something similar to the sonata chapter
Good chapter, I prefer the ones where they wet themselves all the way, like this one. Although, while panties are fine, I'd have liked it better if her shorts had stayed up, and hope you do something like that with Rainbow Dash if you ever find a way to make it work with her.