Jesus H. Christ! The main character is a badass! Looking forward to more.

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But my no fairy tale update

hey, i like this guy!

I actually hope that he keeps that attitude.

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awesome story so far dude cant wait for ch 2

Nice I can't wait for the next one

I like how this is about a cynical anti-brony compared to the usual self-insert sort of story that most write of. It feels like a breath of fresh sir and I can't wait for more... 4 / 5 stars

I like this character a lot! Cant wait for updates.

This story has potential to be fun, but that last line made me. . .

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The MC not being a brony gets you points, dude.

Have a cookie.

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Will Barker get something wolf related?

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Wow. Someone who dislikes all comments about people liking the main character. I just gotta say, WTF BRO?!

3495228 someone down-thumbed my comment because of that?! ok, fuck you whoever you are, just fuck you.

3495228>>3495236 Probably just a troll. Pay it no heed.

*yawns* oh someone disliked my conmet what else is new?

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I really don't like this guy. When he gets to Ponyville, he's probably going to try and stab Fluttershy with whatever he can find.

If FiMFiction has taught me anything, it's that bronies are the absolutely worst people to be in HiEs. There are (almost) zero Brony-in-Equestria stories that aren't crap. Give me a misanthrope with no preconceived love for a buncha celebrity horsies any day.

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would demand more 'kill the dogs' but that too blood thirsty

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Give me neither. Give me an original, fully fleshed out, three dimensional character who makes rational (or at least understandable) descions and is likeable/relatable/sympathetic. Oh wait, this is FimFiction, NEVER MIND!

Note: I am being sarcastic of most protagonists of Fimfiction, this story's P. fits most of the characteristics I would like to see. Continue with the story.

I'm sorry to be a science nazi, but at the depth he must have fell into the water, and without time to acclimate, his eardrums would, at the least, be damaged, perhaps even popped.

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