a bit fast and a bit too much 2d and bland play by play

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Yeah I know, we're going to slow it down though.

Just let me know once you want to make a Chapter 2

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Already started on it.

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Link plx.

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It's in your Google Drive.

I like the story hope an update is coming for it !!!!

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Oh yeah I'm working on the outline for the second chapter.

3513167 HOORAY HAPPINESS FOR EVERYONE !!!!

“Just, what happened?” Celestia asked raising an eyebrow.
“Nothing, I just owe Luna for saying she had a fat ass, that’s all.” With that, Ven continued to follow Luna, not even waiting for a response.
“Things are definitely going to get interesting.” Celestia said to herself as she followed the two and Discord, for once looking somewhat surprised, agreed with her.

. that's so awesome